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Published: 2018-04-05 03:01:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 17479; Favourites: 402; Downloads: 0
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Commission for JayFoxfire! (65 minutes for colour, 45 minutes for previous sketch, total of 110 minutes!)
Scene from a fanfic called "Fragile"
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Comments: 57
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Love the emotional and drama just like in the used to be Archie comics. It's nicely drawn and brilliantly well balanced dialogue. Keep up the good work.
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Kinda makes me think this could be a sequel where he privately calls her out on that public incident.
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What is it going to take? How about getting her pregnant with your son and daughter?
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Such gorgeous art! I'm loving the colours! Keep it up! Β Β Β
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Thank you very much!
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Have you got a link to the actual fanfic this scene is based on?Β
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I can provide it to you:Β www.fanfiction.net/s/7291619/1β¦
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Which chapter does the scene in the picture occur?Β
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Chapter 17: Faster and Faster
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I've already praised this scene before, so I won't repeat myself too much here. Just know, I love this moment, and you did an amazing job showing the emotion of this particular part. Thank you for coloring it, as well. It looks genuinely perfect.
Also, I highly recommend watching Violet Evergarden on Netflix. I can't talk about it without giving anything away, but trust me, its special.
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Thank you! 
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He doesnβt look angry enough for it too be right in the story
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I've never read the story myself, I was going off of someone else's drawing of the scene and did my best
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It wasnβt meant to sound like that. it was a good drawing and you should continue!π
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Huh! Sonic finally got himself some chest fur. Must have been tired of Shadow and Silver putting him to shame. Hehe.Β Β
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wait, this was supposed to be in a cave?Β
Or was this just a new thing you came up with?Β
Very touching script by the way.Β
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Yes they were in a cave.Β
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*looks through subscriptions*Β
*sees this*Β
Thinks to myself: Huh.Β I wrote a fanfic named Fragile.Β That's pretty--wait.Β Hold on.Β That's--wait--HOLY COW! That's--I--WHOA!Β That's my fanfic!Β That's--oh man!Β Β
This is so, so good.Β I love this so much.Β 
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Haha, I figured you love it! I love the story, its so good
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Indeed I do!Β And thank you!Β X)Β I can't say how incredibly cool that is coming from you!Β
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Holy cow!Β
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Oh wow. You're alive! Me and my friend jayfoxfire Β loved your fic and requested this. We're still waiting for the sequel "Last Breath" and the continuation of "A hero and his princess" xD.
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Ha ha, I am!Β XDΒ It's so, so cool!Β And oh man.Β I'm glad you guys are looking forward to it!Β
The wonderful thing about this is that it's started my imagination again...
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Always good to find things that inspire you!
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I understand why it's been so long though. Like you stated on your fanfiction page, real life does take priority over these things. I myself have college, a girlfriend, and a job, but I try my hardest to make stories and art for the people on here who enjoy it as well as on my own fanfic page. Regardless, I appreciate your comment on this so much. To support you, I added you to my deviant watch. Hope you continue to thrive in life and I wish you well Espionage247
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Thank you for that.Β
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I don't ship Sonic x Sally, but this is really cute! Great job!
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i see what Sally is doing, she's trying to make Sonic put her in the new comics X3
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Hnnnng, this got me in the feels.Β That dialogue coming from Sonic is so, SO good.Β That fanfiction already sounds amazing.
I love the expressions here.Β Sonic's really concerned with how much he wants Sally to know he cares.Β I don't even know how to describe it, but it's amazing.Β The expressions, the body language -- simply amazing.Β I LOVE how he's grabbing on to her shoulders trying to convince her how much he cares about her -- like he's trying to get her to her senses and shake any doubt that he cares for her out of her mind.Β That, along with his expressions, and this dialogue, makes it perfect.Β GAAAH, I can't describe it with proper words, and I wish I could.Β He really loves her. ;__;Β I love how you made Sally look so vulnerable; it makes her feelings of doubt about Sonic caring feel so real, and it actually makes you feel sorry for her.Β What makes this even better is that you can also see that Sonic's words are slowly getting through to her, and that he means what he's saying.Β She's coming to her senses on how noble Sonic really is. ;-;
I love this.Β It's amazing.Β You did a really good job on the shading here.Β I like how the water on them both turned out a lot.Β The characters also just look really on-point, especially in the first three panels.Β Those first three just really sell the scene.Β Sonic's concerned look of disbelief in the first panel, Sally's in the second, and their placement in the composition of the third panel -- GAAAAH. 
AMAZING job on this!Β It really hits the heart. ;_;
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Somehow I missed this comment before, but I wanted to second THE-Julian-Cabrera-- this is a great and thoughtful comment on the piece! Thank you so much for your feedback
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Ahhhh, you're very welcome! ;v;
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Great comment.
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Awww, thank you!Β I'm glad you liked my comment! ;u;
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You're very welcome. I left a long response on your profile after you made this comment and started watching you too :].
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I saw it!Β Made sure to respond to it as well because it was very kind, and I appreciate it~Β Thank you so much again!
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Oh gosh Sonally feels!! ;A; Can I say that I love how you did the wetness of the fur/quills??
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Wooooow the color itβs amazing! (And I love the fanfic) thanks a lot. Itβs great
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