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Published: 2015-12-15 03:08:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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I am cloaked with starlight,bathed in tears,
and shining like the moon,
not like the sun.
Not like the sun,
because my light is
for and of you,
O Best Beloved!
I cannot shine
when you are gone.
I am the moon,
hidden in the brightness
of trillions of stars.
I see only you, love,
and reflect your light.
I am not the sun.
You are.
I am but the moon,
and I will follow your light.
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Comments: 9
AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-12-20 01:10:17 +0000 UTC]
First your comment in the descriptive box. Rudyard Kipling (who is not me). lol
Anyway, I like your poem, it's very touching.
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catnipcutie In reply to AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-12-20 20:09:42 +0000 UTC]
haha XD thanks so much!
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catnipcutie In reply to Amanda-The-Lionheart [2015-12-17 01:31:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! <3
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Amanda-The-Lionheart In reply to catnipcutie [2015-12-17 01:34:05 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome! It is such a beautifully written piece!
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catnipcutie In reply to slestualenergie [2015-12-16 03:08:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! and thanks for pointing me to the song, it's beautiful!
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catnipcutie In reply to KennaSteele [2015-12-15 03:15:51 +0000 UTC]
I draw a lot of influence from Shakespeare thank you very much!
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