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catnipcutie — Universe Melodies
#singing #universe #villanelle
Published: 2015-12-07 04:09:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Rise up, child, and leave your painA dying star is now your light
Melodies of the universe run through your veins
You’re strong, child, stand in the rain
Your time to fall is not tonight
Rise up, child, and leave your pain
Sing, child, join the refrain
let your restless heart take flight
Melodies of the universe run through your veins
Smile, child, your sadness slain
Take your sword and join the fight
Rise up, child and leave your pain
Earth and stars, your spirit twain
You’re a child of bright moonlight
Melodies of the universe run through your veins
Let not this world your joy detain
Shine like a star in this twilight
Rise up, child, and leave your pain
Melodies of the universe run through your veins
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Comments: 16
This is a very pretty one, very well written ♥
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Oh, this is lovely.
Believe me, we're both pretty much on the same level with structured poems. Especially meter, for me.
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thanks so much!
structured poems are a struggle for me... I just like to write my feelings X3
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thank you very much!
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Maybe you can write structured poems and produce them by sheer magic?
I'm liking this!
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haha seems legit XD thanks!
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Did you mean to put this in the villanelle contest folder?
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oh no I thought I did D:
but yes that's where I meant to put it
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Actually, it's already there! Sorry about that.
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that's alright! :33
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OK let me figure out how to move it. I keep forgetting.
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Wonderful piece of work! It might not be a 'properly' structured poem, by societie's standards, but goodness, is this a beautiful peice!! Would you consider joining my group? writers-gonna-write.deviantart…
I would love to have you on board?
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I would love to! Thanks so much! :33
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