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catnipkitty — A Nice Cup of Tea
Published: 2006-08-18 02:23:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Running in the park,
Dancing among the trees

He helps himself,
To peanut brittle and tea

"What a wonderful day to live!"
He shouts to himself as he pours

A trickle runs down the pot,
And burns him on his knee
As if it wanted to say,
"Don't drink me!"

"Ow!" the elephant roars
As he hopps on his foot,
He holds onto his tender flesh

He examines his wound,
But no harm is done!

And he leaps with joy
"Oh lucky me!"
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Comments: 4

AshleyLeopard [2006-08-20 04:19:42 +0000 UTC]

This is so whimsical! I love it! It's very Alice in Wonderland, without the creepy bits. :>

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-08-21 01:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I really have no idea what I was thinking of when I wrote it. XD I think I started out writing something completely different, but nothing was coming to me and I was hyper so I just started being silly. But it came out really good!! XD

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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2006-08-22 00:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Good job Hyperness + sillyness = good writing. XD

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-08-22 02:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I don't get hyper while I'm writing too often. XD Thanks!!

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