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Published: 2010-01-20 02:46:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description
She sat.She colored.
In the kitchen
where
the swinging door
was held
agape by the was it the
big rock that
held the door
open
Mother Father
Grandfather Grandmother
Grandfather
Mother
Words passed between
lips
of which a
little girl wouldn't
remember wouldn't
understand
Grandfather turns
away. The rock
it held the
door.
Mother now
lunges
at Grandfather the
rock is not
holding the door
Time stands still.
And she
she was coloring at the kitchen
table.
And the door swung
open
and closed
open and closed
Comments: 5
Well written!
I don't think it quite deserves a 'mature' stamp, but maybe perhaps a warning.
Just because you don't want someone to freak out because Mommy killed Grandpa.
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Thanks!
That's kinda what I was thinking....hmmm....
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You're welcome! I hope that helps.
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