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Published: 2009-11-24 01:51:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Ah yes...now it's timefor your favorite murderer
as it slowly tortures your lungs,
strangling the oxygen from them
with smoggy claws - no
matter how hard your body tries,
it can't remove the death
that's surely upon you,
for the smoke easily evades
any tight grip.
How sad it is when you
refuse to listen to the cries
emanating from your body,
the choked coughs a type of
sorrowful sob of a prisoner
long forgotten and left behind
in the toxic air swirling about
his head, realizing the fight is
useless...he's already lost.
Yet you continue unphased
and take a drag,
coaxing the burning tip of cancer
to glow its pleasure at
your misfortune as you ignore
your pounding heart's tired
groans of anguish - the strain
is just too much for it to handle
much longer...
What will it take?
When your relief stabs you in
the back and you're lying in that
hospital bed, the tangle of tubes
your only lifeline, your loved ones
by your side with mirrored looks of the pain
you surely feel deep within your bones...
is that when you'll kick the habit?
There's just one problem with that...
By then, it will be too late...
Comments: 6
Kira73 [2009-11-26 14:00:04 +0000 UTC]
I should show this to my mom, and sis, and uncle...
A scary disease.
Well done!
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catnipkitty In reply to Kira73 [2009-11-30 01:11:41 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to show it to as many people as you like if you think it'll help!
It really is a scary disease...
Thank you!
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felix-bambaboy [2009-11-26 05:35:22 +0000 UTC]
oh my, this almost made me think twice about my habit..
a wonderful poem , though.. really.
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catnipkitty In reply to felix-bambaboy [2009-11-30 01:12:20 +0000 UTC]
Well, that was the desired affect, so I'm glad it worked! And thank you! I'm glad you thought so!
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tox2wallz [2009-11-25 23:05:19 +0000 UTC]
ergh, my mother smokes, the smell follows me like it's an entity.
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catnipkitty In reply to tox2wallz [2009-11-30 01:12:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, nothing clings like the smell of smoke.
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