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Published: 2006-12-05 21:02:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Red hot embers
Burn in my being

A flame within,
That will never
Be extinguished

Scorching as the sun,
Yet gentle as the moon

It glows eternal life

Within my being
It dwells,
Remaining, even after Death
Has led me
Through the realm
Of scattered, lost souls

Through to the Everlasting Light...
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Comments: 4

lost-lil-eskimo [2006-12-08 01:09:10 +0000 UTC]

this may seem like an ackward question, but do you go to church? and i loved your poem by the way!

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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2006-12-09 00:52:02 +0000 UTC]

It's not an awkward question!! My religion doesn't really have a church, but we have houses of worship that my family and I go to when we can. And we meet at each others houses to worship as well. I'm a member of the Baha'i Faith. Thanks!!

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AshleyLeopard [2006-12-06 01:52:13 +0000 UTC]

It's pretty. It reads like something that you'd see in a holy book.

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-12-09 00:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! Well, that's good, considering the genre.

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