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Published: 2007-09-03 03:53:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description A melody,
The soul that
Lies within us all,
Is nothing without
A beat,
The heart that
Dwells within
Flesh and blood,
Is lonesome without
A harmony,
The companion that
Intertwines melody,
Creating
A song,
The intricate web
Of love
Inside us all

French Translation: Eternel Chanson

Une melodie,
L'ame cette
Couches dans nous tout,
Etant rien sans
Un bat,
Le coeur cet
Habitant dans
Chair et sang,
Etant isole sans
Une harmonie,
Le compagnon cet
Entrelaces melodie,
Cree
Une chanson,
Le tissu embrouille
D'amour
Dans nous tout
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Comments: 16

RockerByBaby [2007-09-06 02:42:52 +0000 UTC]

*GASP!*

I LOVE this!!

It's very clever.

and you speak French?!

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-09-06 03:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

I speak a little....I took 3 years of it in school, but they don't really know how to teach foreign languages out here. I can speak a little bit and make my way through some things if I'm given enough time. It's no where near as good as my mom or my oldest sister...

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2007-09-06 04:35:46 +0000 UTC]

That's so neat, though....

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-09-06 20:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Do you know any other languages?

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2007-09-07 01:09:27 +0000 UTC]

No prob


I speak some Spanish.

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-09-09 04:55:34 +0000 UTC]

I learned a bit of Spanish in middle school, but I don't remember much of it.

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2007-09-10 00:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Alot has seemed to slip from my mind as well.

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-09-10 02:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.....it's sad too. I think that if they really wanted different languages to stick with people after they learn, they should really be teaching it in elementary school. A young mind is easier to teach than a grown one. Sort of like dogs, if you think abou it.

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2007-09-10 02:24:56 +0000 UTC]

VERY true....

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-09-10 02:26:46 +0000 UTC]

If I had a choice to have taken a foreign language when I was younger I would have jumped at the chance!

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2007-09-10 02:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, same here, and it probably would have come in handy

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-09-10 02:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Most definitely!!

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AshleyLeopard [2007-09-04 04:15:16 +0000 UTC]

I think it's pretty without needing a higher message or anything, I think it speaks for itself.

Add the French at the bottom as a decorative bit!

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2007-09-05 01:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm still trying to think of a title though.....I'll have to put the French version up then!!

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Alchemy-of-the-Heart [2007-09-03 20:39:41 +0000 UTC]

It is very... viney and slithery and it does not stay still long enough for me to get a grasp on the whole thing at once. Which makes for a very good read and poetry that is worth persuing. Good job!

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catnipkitty In reply to Alchemy-of-the-Heart [2007-09-04 03:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I'm glad you like it! I'll have to think on what to do with it.....I'm really bad at staying with stories.

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