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Published: 2009-11-24 22:42:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description Perhaps this new mind
brings a breath of fresh air
to the withered flowers
locked in my vice,
for now I see
I was created thus
to play the clown stumbling
across his words as does
the buffoon his own two feet.

And in my blood, festered
clots align,
breaking news of my wound's
history like the town crier
bellows in the street.

Would I, perchance,
see fit to dispel the darkness
lurking in my breast
I'm sure comprehension
would dawn on thy face,
but alack!
No such discrepencies
will I purge for your sake.    
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Comments: 7

aquagirl7 [2010-01-07 01:21:05 +0000 UTC]

wow! i hope i can be as good as you! you really know how to articulate your diction!

very well done!

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catnipkitty In reply to aquagirl7 [2010-01-07 18:42:30 +0000 UTC]

Aww! That's so sweet of you to say! Thanks so much! I'm sure you will be!

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aquagirl7 In reply to catnipkitty [2010-01-07 19:11:30 +0000 UTC]

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D-E-F [2009-12-05 08:28:25 +0000 UTC]

This poem does actually kinda remind me of Shakespeare. I think it's neat how there's no real meaning, so everyone who reads it can form their own meaning in their head

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catnipkitty In reply to D-E-F [2009-12-05 20:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm taking a Shakespeare class, so I've been reading a lot of his plays....which might explain something! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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felix-bambaboy [2009-12-04 00:23:56 +0000 UTC]

some parts were undecipherable..
the rest was pretty enjoyable..
"withered flowers locked in my vice"?

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catnipkitty In reply to felix-bambaboy [2009-12-04 04:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed parts of it anyway! I really have no idea where it came from... ....I was tired, so that could have something to do with it.

"Withered flowers locked in my vice" was meant to convey something good that no longer is virtuous...if that makes sense? So, fresh flowers would be something good, but they've been transformed by vice so they're now withered. It was supposed to be a metaphor...

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