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Published: 2007-10-22 17:04:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description As I creep into the garden,
I smell the rich fragrances of foliage

Dew still covers velvety soft petals
And the deep green grass
Is like a gentle sea beneath my feet

Bleeding hearts and roses as white as cotton
Compliment each-other's beauty,
And lush violets trim the edges like lace

A vine of grapes stretches across the
Tall white fence
To give my garden a rich taste,
While the scent of gardenia
Penetrates the senses

Many wonderful fruit trees border my garden,
They make the tastebuds cry out for a sample

And here I sit
As I take it all in,
The magnificence of my
Fresh morning garden
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Comments: 8

RockerByBaby [2007-10-29 04:18:11 +0000 UTC]

0oh, I'm loving this!!

For one, the imagery is just....amazing! And you placed it so beautifully in nicely written stanzas

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-10-29 17:07:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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aquasea [2007-10-22 17:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. ^^ Gave me a peaceful feeling. I want a garden like that.

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aquasea In reply to aquasea [2007-10-22 17:22:05 +0000 UTC]

I especially like the details you put into this. I wish I could write. >.<

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aquasea In reply to aquasea [2007-12-14 19:52:17 +0000 UTC]

I've tried. It just never comes out as well as this did. I like to write stories, though.

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catnipkitty In reply to aquasea [2008-09-18 04:19:01 +0000 UTC]

I thought I had sent a reply to this....? Maybe I'm just losing my mind. Anyway, thanks for the nice comments and I might pop in and take a look at your gallery at some point!

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catnipkitty In reply to aquasea [2007-12-14 05:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again! Have you tried writing something before? I'm sure if something moved you enough, you'd get a wonderful poem out of it!

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catnipkitty In reply to aquasea [2007-10-22 17:12:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad it had that effect! I want a garden like that too...

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