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Published: 2007-10-22 17:04:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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As I creep into the garden,I smell the rich fragrances of foliage
Dew still covers velvety soft petals
And the deep green grass
Is like a gentle sea beneath my feet
Bleeding hearts and roses as white as cotton
Compliment each-other's beauty,
And lush violets trim the edges like lace
A vine of grapes stretches across the
Tall white fence
To give my garden a rich taste,
While the scent of gardenia
Penetrates the senses
Many wonderful fruit trees border my garden,
They make the tastebuds cry out for a sample
And here I sit
As I take it all in,
The magnificence of my
Fresh morning garden
Comments: 8
RockerByBaby [2007-10-29 04:18:11 +0000 UTC]
0oh, I'm loving this!!
For one, the imagery is just....amazing! And you placed it so beautifully in nicely written stanzas
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aquasea [2007-10-22 17:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. ^^ Gave me a peaceful feeling. I want a garden like that.
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aquasea In reply to aquasea [2007-10-22 17:22:05 +0000 UTC]
I especially like the details you put into this. I wish I could write. >.<
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aquasea In reply to aquasea [2007-12-14 19:52:17 +0000 UTC]
I've tried. It just never comes out as well as this did. I like to write stories, though.
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catnipkitty In reply to aquasea [2008-09-18 04:19:01 +0000 UTC]
I thought I had sent a reply to this....? Maybe I'm just losing my mind. Anyway, thanks for the nice comments and I might pop in and take a look at your gallery at some point!
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catnipkitty In reply to aquasea [2007-12-14 05:16:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again! Have you tried writing something before? I'm sure if something moved you enough, you'd get a wonderful poem out of it!
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catnipkitty In reply to aquasea [2007-10-22 17:12:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad it had that effect! I want a garden like that too...
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