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Published: 2009-07-13 02:51:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description I'm just a sketch
floating in a foggy dream
as the Artist creates me;
hands raised in a silent plea,
I'm begging -
                      for what?
I do not know.
Eyes like shutters locked up
tight, face lifted upwards:
milky white.

A stance of pleading,
but not bleeding, for
something good to come;
I resonate helpless prayers,
not spoken
but thought - for my mouth
has been sewn shut
with the cement of defeat.

The pencil that once, lovingly,
traced my curves - from the
arc of my arms to
the shaded dimension
of my legs - has stuttered
and sputtered to a
halt.

With a jagged slash,
the Artist reels back
in frustration, leaving
a scar across my face;
my limbs begin to
vanish without a trace;
my torso is soon just
wiped from the page as
the Artist scrubs
my life away with that
pink knife
gripped in slender talons.

Once, I was a vision -
a beacon of life and light;
my image warmed cold blood
and swarmed the mind
with creative thought;
I inquired and inspired
with my aspiring ambition
to reach out of this
two dimensional tarp and
touch the Artist with
trembling lines,
wanting so much to
know the mysteries
outside of this paper prison.

Foolishness, however,
rewards no one; and now
it's too late for certainty;
I'm just a pair of
crossed fingers,
awaiting the day
tender strokes will
salvage what's left
and return me to my
solid page.
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Comments: 11

InnocentFreespirit [2009-07-14 22:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Pretty damn good, i must say.

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catnipkitty In reply to InnocentFreespirit [2009-07-17 03:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

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Elorah-Seychah [2009-07-14 19:19:15 +0000 UTC]

oooo I really like this. I also find it interesting that you see yourself as the artists creation, and subject to their creative whims.

Good job ^_^

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catnipkitty In reply to Elorah-Seychah [2009-07-17 03:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I try to use different perspectives in my writing.

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NaturalEssences [2009-07-13 12:51:58 +0000 UTC]

I like this one quite a bit.

-Bill

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catnipkitty In reply to NaturalEssences [2009-07-14 03:01:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Bill! I'm glad you liked it!

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RockerByBaby [2009-07-13 04:21:56 +0000 UTC]

This was amazing to read, I get the strong vibe that you've put mich sweat & passion into this.
Wow the imagery!



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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-07-14 03:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!! I'm glad you liked it! I guess I did put a good amount of work into it, but the last couple of stanzas pretty much just flowed out of my mind and onto the page quite easily.

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2009-07-14 03:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Good deal, much welcome!

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AshleyLeopard [2009-07-13 03:03:10 +0000 UTC]

I love this! What a great way to show an artist's frustration over creating something she doesn't like and the artwork's frustration over not being creative! I love the little italicized "for what?" at the beginning, like the work is being born. Great!!

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2009-07-13 03:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the !!!!!

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