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Published: 2007-11-26 20:12:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Surrounded by competitors
Unable to budge,
Trapped in the
Unwanted position
Of being the judge

Who shall stay?
Who shall go?
With whom
Shall my affections grow?

The tournament
For my heart begins
As brave knights
Joust
With rage filled ambition
To win the prize:
Me

But as I watch
Such violence before me,
I realize the dwindled
Compassion in my heart,
And look upon two foul
Creatures with disgust
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Comments: 10

AshleyLeopard [2007-12-21 04:05:49 +0000 UTC]

This is ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS. Almost like an medieval ballad with a modern twist. My favorite part is the first stanza.

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2007-12-21 04:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! I really like how it turned out. And I think it gives guys an idea of what most women think about 2 guys fighting over them.

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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2007-12-21 06:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Men and their testosterone...god bless 'em, the silly things. XD;

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2007-12-22 00:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess they can't really help themselves.

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Infrunitas [2007-11-30 12:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Good piece and well-placed punctuation. You provide a nice inner look into the female approach. I've often wondered how women can find us attractive. But both sides have their drawbacks ^.~

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2007-11-30 20:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! LoL, well guys do have their good points! But I do agree with you, both sides have their drawbacks. And a lot of it is some of the same stuff that no one likes, but can't help. It's a human nature thing, I guess.

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Infrunitas [2007-11-30 12:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Bah! Monsters need affection too!

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2007-11-30 20:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess that's true. Maybe if they had affection they wouldn't be so monstrous?...

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2007-12-02 16:38:20 +0000 UTC]

nah, it'd rule out the insurance plans and job description.

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2007-12-02 21:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I guess so!

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