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catnipkitty — Living in a State of Numbness
Published: 2008-12-02 03:38:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Moving pictures flash past my eyes
like old silent movies
clipping on by;
the brightly colored hues
float 'round my head
in a dizzying array:
ghosts from a recent past
not yet realizing they're dead and gone.

The cotton fields grow thick
in my skull, just about pouring
from my ears as I glide
through days (just like those ghosts),
waiting 'till the fields are bare
and the sedative of fog disperses,
revealing the blinding ball of lava
in the deep-set blue above.

My life oozes by until
all that's left is the silent hissing
an old record-player makes when
it has run off the track,
signaling the end of the music;
it just rotates 'round and 'round,
the black needle slightly bobbing
up and down as the hissing speaker
drowns out the light in my eyes
and consumes my conscious mind,
leaving me to live in a state of numbness.
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Comments: 11

Infrunitas [2008-12-21 17:00:37 +0000 UTC]

the first tow stanzas are a great lead in for the last. Nice work!

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-12-22 04:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Wyn-- [2008-12-12 22:11:10 +0000 UTC]

I enjoy how you use silent movies and record players to set the mood. there are some awesome images, the last four lines of the second stanza are really cool.

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catnipkitty In reply to Wyn-- [2008-12-14 03:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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RockerByBaby [2008-12-03 00:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Most of my days go by in that manner. I've began to consider it normal.

You've many thumbsup metpahors here.
Love your spinning record metaphor the best!

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2008-12-03 03:52:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm starting to feel like it's normal too. I think it's just from lack of sleep and severe boredom though.

Why thank you! I really like that one too!

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2008-12-03 06:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome!

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lost-lil-eskimo [2008-12-02 04:02:02 +0000 UTC]

lol I totally know how you feel! Nicely written by the way

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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2008-12-02 04:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad to know I'm not the only one!

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lost-lil-eskimo In reply to catnipkitty [2008-12-02 04:48:47 +0000 UTC]

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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2008-12-02 18:35:45 +0000 UTC]

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