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Published: 2007-07-04 01:42:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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The Sun,With its outstretched fingertips
Kisses my face
The warmth of life
Lays down beside me,
And I wake
The Sun,
So brilliant
So bright,
Caresses my soul
I am the Moon,
Waking to the sound
Of twilight's music
This is our dance,
As we circle our child,
The Earth,
In our arms
Forever we sing our lullaby,
The lullaby of eternity,
The lullaby of life,
Forever...
Comments: 11
catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2007-08-05 20:40:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! I like to use personification a lot in my poems.
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toxicpoet [2007-07-05 21:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Splendid imagery my dear! Sorry it's taken me so long to look at all these. I am so very behind! @.@
Smashing pumpkins eh? Which song?
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catnipkitty In reply to toxicpoet [2007-07-06 00:49:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Don't worry about taking too long. You're the 2nd person to actually comment, so I'm not going to yell at anyone.
I was listening to Mellon Collie and the Infinite Sadness....I know, it's a little strange to get Lullaby out of it, but I've always thought of the sun coming up in that song or something like that.
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toxicpoet [2007-07-05 21:13:29 +0000 UTC]
Spledid imagery my dear! Sorry it's taken me so long to look at all these. I am so very behind! @.@
Smashing pumpkins eh? Which song?
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twentyonethirteen [2007-07-04 01:59:12 +0000 UTC]
It's pretty. Though astronomically incorrect but hey, I'm not going to nitpick
Love it sweetie x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-07-04 02:00:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, yeah, but it's more of an Earthly perspective....if that makes sense.....Thanks!
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-07-04 19:56:06 +0000 UTC]
You should check out "Talking in My Grave"....I just put it on DA today...
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