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Published: 2010-06-03 02:16:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Isn't life a curious thing? It hovers,
contemplative of skillful disarray
while the only purpose it seems to serve is
chaos. Nothing is ever free to roam
far from its sight and

only fools would dare to escape. Would you be
caught beneath this contraption we call life?
I would vanish, if it were easy. But…I
can't do that without drawing negative
glances towards me.

Problems break our dreams of the future. Still though,
life continues, undaunted – leaving all
scrambling up the mountain it made. Is time our
friend? We'll need it to make the most of our
lives on this planet.
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Comments: 10

Lil-Christa [2010-06-06 18:04:17 +0000 UTC]

"Nothing is ever free to roam far from its sight and only fools would dare to escape." <---my fave line this is really beautiful and makes you think.....if you can write this with a headache; there's no telling what you can do on a good day

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catnipkitty In reply to Lil-Christa [2010-06-06 23:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I like that line too! I'm really glad you liked it!

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Lil-Christa In reply to catnipkitty [2010-06-07 17:08:48 +0000 UTC]

your welcome, keep up the good work

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TheCeejays [2010-06-04 11:29:16 +0000 UTC]

I agree, this is a very thoughtful piece. The words have many layers, I do not doubt that next time I read this poem I'll get something different from it. Well written.

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catnipkitty In reply to TheCeejays [2010-06-04 20:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you think so!

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londonrey [2010-06-03 19:46:44 +0000 UTC]

This is very thought-provoking. The first stanza is my favorite. ^_^

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catnipkitty In reply to londonrey [2010-06-03 19:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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londonrey In reply to catnipkitty [2010-06-03 20:46:07 +0000 UTC]

^_^ I like the first line of your quote too. XD.

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catnipkitty In reply to londonrey [2010-06-04 20:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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londonrey In reply to catnipkitty [2010-06-04 22:02:48 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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