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Published: 2008-02-28 19:52:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description You're mouth is
Chalk-full of lies:

A player of women,
Boasting your talents
Of shattering hearts,
Bewildering love-lost
Mothers, daughters,
Sisters, and wives

Proclaiming your talents
To easily fooled prey
That bow down before you,
As they would some
Ancient Greek God
In a temple of lust

A sickening display
Is all you are to me,
One who comes and goes
Like the winds that bring rain
To the parched soil of the soul

You are a wicked man,
Confident and ready
To rip out a woman's heart
When she's down,
Wounding her further

I mourn for her heart,
For she lost love before...
Found you...
And died from it
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Comments: 19

sydneysays [2008-03-28 02:56:22 +0000 UTC]

simply put, this is clever.
and almost cute, in the way that every single girl that reads this is going to understand your frustration and anger.
stupid boys. =]

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catnipkitty In reply to sydneysays [2008-03-28 20:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I appreciate it!

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RockerByBaby [2008-03-11 04:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Oohh such anger!

but understandable.

Not scraps! This is well-written. Temple of lust, clever.


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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2008-03-11 16:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't worry! I wouldn't put this in scraps! Thanks!!

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2008-03-12 00:58:51 +0000 UTC]





Sure!

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Infrunitas [2008-02-29 14:26:20 +0000 UTC]

An excellent flow of passion and a means to steal away the flame he thinks he has. He just needs the right temptress to show him how a real woman breaks little boys.

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-02-29 17:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! LoL. I guess so...he's just so annoying....almost makes me want to do this --> .......but I won't....'cause I don't want to go to jail...

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-03-14 15:19:00 +0000 UTC]

As long as you can make a chainsaw look like an accident, I don't see a problem. "But officer, he fell off the tree he was cutting..."

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-03-14 16:35:21 +0000 UTC]

That almost reminds me of the movie "Fargo". If you've never seen it I recommend it. It's based off of a true story, but it's a really good movie!

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-03-14 17:16:38 +0000 UTC]

am i stealing the idea?

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-03-14 19:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Not exactly. There are 2 official bad guys in the movie and one of them feeds his partner into a wood chipper...

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-03-14 21:47:57 +0000 UTC]

gah, one heck of a way to go!

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-03-15 19:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Very creative though....but messy.....not a good way to hide the fact that you killed someone....unless you clean up REALLY well......

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-03-17 11:36:11 +0000 UTC]

got some 409 under the sink you can borrow

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-03-17 19:11:58 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep that in mind!

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AshleyLeopard [2008-02-29 09:20:22 +0000 UTC]

Excellent writing- I think it captures your description perfectly. I can think of people who don't sexually play others but this still applies to- people who lie, people who pretend like their hurtful actions don't hurt others. Very good!

Maybe under...relationships? Or emotions, if that's a category?

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2008-02-29 17:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was a little ticked off when I wrote it too, so that probably influenced my writing too.

I'm not sure if emotions is a category either...... ...?

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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2008-03-01 03:23:01 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea. XD It could stay where it is and be fine. XD

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2008-03-03 02:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm sure no one will yell at me about it anyway.

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