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Published: 2008-10-24 23:19:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Such a waste:letting melodious minds
slip from sight,
dampened and heavy
like water-logged soil.
The music must flow,
must find some outlet
from the soul's womb
and be brought, singing,
into this world;
it mustn't die unheard
like a miscarried child
that gives no cry, draws
no breath.
My soul is the music, my
heart the metronome
slowly keeping time.
Don't let my soul dim
into the darkness,
returning to a void
where bitter silence
consumes my melody,
where all my hopes
are slashed through
by claws of rejection!
Bring me into being;
place me in harmony's arms
so I may play my part.
Save me from a life
of silence, cramped in
stuffy cubicles and
dead fields of hope,
and position me under
white lights before
the awaiting crowd!
Comments: 14
RockerByBaby [2008-11-18 03:36:37 +0000 UTC]
I loved the second stanza!
Very well written, I recognize improvement in your imagery and works in general.
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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2008-10-25 01:57:04 +0000 UTC]
Is that a good interesting or a bad interesting?
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lost-lil-eskimo In reply to catnipkitty [2008-10-25 03:23:34 +0000 UTC]
.....Interesting usually means good, my friend.
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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2008-10-25 03:36:19 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm glad to hear that then! I feel like I've been stuck in writer's block for quite some time now....hmm...occasionally I'll come up with something, but lately I've run out of inspiration. And I feel like a lot of my stuff isn't as good as it could be. I guess that leaves room for revision....but I tend not to revise things....hehehe...
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lost-lil-eskimo In reply to catnipkitty [2008-10-29 18:12:59 +0000 UTC]
lol I know what you mean. I cant seem to do anything other than school related and its really started to get annoying....so Friday I decided that Im going to skip class...and go....be creative!!
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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2008-10-29 20:01:22 +0000 UTC]
That sounds like a great idea! Why didn't I think of that?
LoL.
But I'll be home on Friday, so I'll definitely be skipping my classes....
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lost-lil-eskimo In reply to catnipkitty [2008-10-30 13:20:46 +0000 UTC]
for skipping classes on friday!!
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