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Published: 2006-08-18 02:10:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 50; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description At peace
In her underwater refuge,
She sleeps for eternity

There are no more battles for her to win

She is a home for many things,
Coral, fish, crustations of all sorts,
All of which take comfort in her being there

A majestic beauty
Who conquered the sea,
Now rests below its surface

Carved of wood and gold,
With tattered sails
That drift in the gentle current
Of the ocean

Yes,
She is the queen of the sea....
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Comments: 6

AshleyLeopard [2006-08-20 04:13:45 +0000 UTC]

I can see a very clear picture in my head. :> I like how you have stanzas and then a random line, I think it adds a lot of style without being obnoxious. :> I like the subject, too!

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-08-21 01:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I love writing about the sea and the things in it. I know what you mean about some things where there's just one line after a stanza when it doesn't really need to be by itself. I try to make them fit where I find they're neccessary. And I don't like to brag or anything, but I do have a knack for doing that kind of stuff. Someone also said to me that they loved how I can write a poem and have maybe a few lines in it that rhyme, but then the rest of it doesn't and there's still that natural flow to it.

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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2006-08-22 00:40:54 +0000 UTC]

You're not bragging when you know it's one of your better works. :>

I like it!

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-08-22 02:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, ok!! Thanks!!

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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2006-08-23 04:24:50 +0000 UTC]

No prob :>

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-08-23 23:14:22 +0000 UTC]

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