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Published: 2006-07-08 00:58:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 40; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Under twilight's cloak of darkness,
They creep

Claws dig deep into the Earth's soil,
Teeth stained yellow chew,
Eyes burn a bright red in the moonlight

They're only purpose
Is to survive,
Clinging to the darkness
They thrive on

Vision is useless against these creatures,
Human pupils can't see in that black air

But listen!
There....
In the dark....
The scratching claws scramble across the ground

That scrambling congregation of rough creatures,
They are invisible

But you know they're there

You know....
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Comments: 3

AshleyLeopard [2006-07-09 21:02:22 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, and such an unusual topic! You made them sound like a hidden army, ready to pounce upon the city's inhabitants at any time

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2006-07-09 21:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I really wanted to write something, but I didn't know what. And then it just sort of popped into my head! Thanks!!

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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2006-07-09 21:30:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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