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catnipkitty — Reverse the Turntable
Published: 2008-04-04 18:31:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description
Delightful chaosIn a world of
Sensible non-sense,
Where feet tread on
Blue skies
And heads tilt up towards
Rich, fertile soil
Tears form the rain
That soaks the clouds
And rainbows are
Held on each end,
Turned like the spindel
On a spicket for
Fun and games
Time turns backwards,
Old bones that crack, snap, pop
Slowly ease and skin that
Sagged (loose with age),
Regains elasticity
The wise lose all
Sense of wisdom and the
Young never learn,
A joyous sight to see
As none are scolded by
Words of boiling water from
Overbearing forces,
Determined to bring all happiness
Crashing to the ground
Comments: 10
Thanks! I appreciate it!
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I agree with glen, you definitely found the right blend of imagery and eye-candy for the viewer.
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"Time turns backwards,
Old bones that crack, snap, pop
Slowly ease and skin that
Sagged (loose with age),
Regains elasticity"
and once again, you sure know how to end 'em!
I think you truly accomplished what you aimed for. 
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Thanks again!! I'm glad you liked it! 
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That's actually pretty good.
Except *wisdome is actually *wisdom
but trust me, I've seen worse today. I go around looking for talent and, to tell you the truth I've been sorely disappointed. Not with you(I don't comment on things I don't like at least a little).
Good work though - it was the heads tilting up line that caught my attention. You used a lot of good description. keep it up.
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Thanks! 
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