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Published: 2009-04-03 04:31:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Two pairs of broken wings
burnt at the tips from falling through
the airy shell cradling the soil;
two lives shattered and scattered
with hardships (enough to fill the
raging oceans and drink them dry);
two lost souls found after
a lifetime of searching...

The passion locked in your eyes
captures my soul, tugging it
ever so gently into the well of your love

You hold me close, those soft hands
whispering the tender thoughts swiftly
escaping your mind as they trail down
my spine and urge rippling shivers
to spread across my skin

Velvet lips soothe these hidden scars,
puckered and pale, with a
healing warmth that rushes beneath
the flimsy casing protecting my soul;
they hover over my throbbing arteries,
track my veins, lull my heart with
an unsung melody that runs deep
within the realms of emotion

No words spoken...no sound but
the trickling rain tap-dancing on the roof,
slipping down the windows, trying
to glimpse our splintered lives mend,
congeal into a love worthy of Heaven

We lie together in the ashes
from our descent, huddled together,
clutched in an embrace: a promise
we will forever keep, as witnessed
by the Moon on her throne atop
the celestial paradise up above
and all the stars in her court;
together, we will rise from
these ashes like the Phoenix
and soar to new life as
the Sun's glow sets our
wings ablaze with light,
until we too resemble the stars
as we rest in the night sky...

forever...
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Comments: 7

Infrunitas [2009-09-26 01:04:37 +0000 UTC]

"hidden scars"

smexy! I actually pride myself on being able to see them.

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2009-09-26 03:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you! A very good thing to be able to see!

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RockerByBaby [2009-07-08 05:47:40 +0000 UTC]

The raging oceans drunk dry, very nifty! Loved the constellation metaphors too. Your variety of writing ideas/projects are very effective and pleasant.



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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-07-10 04:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I try my best to vary the topics I write about and such.

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2009-07-12 07:41:24 +0000 UTC]

You do indeed


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awrighton [2009-04-03 19:47:11 +0000 UTC]

I do like it. I definitely don't mind the used-before-metaphors and imagery because of how you formatted and structured them.

Really beautiful. I am going to have to try reading this while listening to the Moonlight Sonata next time.

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catnipkitty In reply to awrighton [2009-04-05 02:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! And thanks for the too!! I really appreciate it!

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