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Published: 2008-01-15 18:31:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description You whisper hoarsely
In my ear of
Delectable sins
Committed here,
Of bodies entwined
In a forbidden dance
Full of instinctive
Pleasures
That arouse lustful romance,
Only to repent
A sinner's life
And return on your knees
To a forgotten wife
Who melts in your
Wanting hands
As if by some
Silent command,
Leaving my naked
Form
Utterly and completely
Torn,
And so, just one
Favor I ask of thee,
All I ask
As you put
Yourself to bed
At night,
With your wife
Clinging to your side so tight,
Is to dream of me
Dear lover,
Please
Dream of me...
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Comments: 12

Infrunitas [2008-01-18 14:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Gotta love my active imagination! This piece has a wonderful format as it twirls down like the whispers on a dreamer's lips.

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-01-18 15:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad you liked it! It's funny though.....I seem to be thinking of a lot of these poems when I'm half asleep! Which, I guess can be both good and bad......it's good because I can be a little more abstract and bad because I generally have to get up early in the morning! But, no classes on monday!!!!

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-01-18 15:36:59 +0000 UTC]

woo hoo! Just enough time to get the homework done?

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-01-19 02:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely! I've been so bad when it come to procrastination (I'm normally pretty on top of things) lately and I have a 4 page argument essay due on wednsday......not so good. Of course, it's just the draft that I have to have done, but still....I don't want to be worrying about it the day before I have to turn it in...I need to invest in a stapler though.....

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-01-21 14:43:43 +0000 UTC]

haha, You can sell staples whenever someone borrows it. It'll pay for itself in no time!

What was the essay about? They never give us fun assignments like ice cream or write about how we feel anymore. I miss that.

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-01-22 05:17:18 +0000 UTC]

I can borrow a stapler from my friend a couple of doors down, but I don't want to keep bugging her for it.....I wonder if I can get one at CVS..... ....?

I have to write about whether I agree or disagree with this guy's idea that intelligence and morality can be separated. I agree with him, but it was hard trying to find sources to back my idea up. But I found some! They're all internet sources, but she didn't specify this time how many book sources we needed. I used one book source. So she'll have to deal with that (at least for the draft).

Seriously! I would love to write about ice cream or something easy for a change......Don't have to do much research for a topic like that! I'll be really glad when I don't have to take any more comp. classes!

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Infrunitas In reply to catnipkitty [2008-01-23 15:08:34 +0000 UTC]

But those are the best! You learn how to do borders and play on ms software.

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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2008-01-23 21:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Well.......not so much for me....I'm pretty technilogically challenged. I don't really like to play with things on the computer unless it's solitaire. But, to each his own!

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grenedine [2008-01-15 21:26:17 +0000 UTC]

I guess it depends on how active one's imagination is. If you're not sure, put it under the mature warning since it isn't literally graphic.

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catnipkitty In reply to grenedine [2008-01-15 22:26:26 +0000 UTC]

I guess I could do that. Thanks! What did you think of the poem?

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grenedine In reply to catnipkitty [2008-01-16 14:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was a very good narrative piece. It sounds like you could use that as a jumping off point for a story.

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catnipkitty In reply to grenedine [2008-01-16 23:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I hadn't thought of it as a narrative poem, but I guess it does have that sort of quality to it!

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