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catnipkitty — Staring Into Flames
Published: 2007-11-26 20:20:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Staring off into spaceWith no concentration
In this busy place
As the cold of winter
Stings my face,
Somewhere way out
In the distance
Of an ever-changing
Landscape
Where dreams are
Reality
And anything is
Possible
As a faint wind
Blows everything away,
Like tracks in the
Desert sand
Turned into a
Vast expanse of
Never-ending lines
On dunes that reach
The sky
And then reality
Snaps back into place
As a burning bit
Of kindle wood
Pops and crackles
In the dancing flames
That devour the last
Remnants of life
I stare into those flames
On a cold, dark night...
Comments: 6
It reminds me a bit of The Golden Compass (I only saw the movie so far though.)
I also that you love when you tell us where you wrote your stuff...I like it. x)
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I haven't seen it (or read it for that matter). Was it a good movie? Thanks!!
Well, I think it gives the reader a better idea of why I wrote it or perhaps a better idea of the particular feeling of the poem. 
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It was great! and so was your poem. XD
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Thanks! 
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