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catnipkitty — Struggle to Keep Up
Published: 2007-07-06 01:03:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Track the path I make,
Until your limbs are cold and weak,
Through the thick and clustered forest
During twilight's pitch black keep

Your lungs will heave,
And your struggling heart will pound,
With eyes nervously shifting all about

My feet pad lightly against the ground,
While your feet laggardly follow

Hoping to rest your weary head on a comfortable pillow,
You drift into an illusionary scene,
Only to be shattered
By you,
Stumbling over your own feet
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Comments: 4

AshleyLeopard [2007-07-26 23:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Very fantasy!

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2007-07-27 02:33:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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toxicpoet [2007-07-06 16:35:50 +0000 UTC]

The 4th and last stanzas are my favourite. I like it! ^^

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catnipkitty In reply to toxicpoet [2007-07-06 22:42:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bundle!!

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