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Description
The setting sunIn the distant sky
Mourns the end of the day
As it slips silently
Into the unknown abyss
Comments: 6
RockerByBaby [2007-12-03 20:17:35 +0000 UTC]
I agree with ~Infrunitas....This piece is relievingly comforting.
Splendid job!!
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Infrunitas [2007-12-03 12:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Good stand-alone or even a closing to a longer piece. There is a longing and exhaustion seeping from the speaker. I envision a farmer or a outside worker finally being able to slip from his/her duties.
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catnipkitty In reply to Infrunitas [2007-12-03 20:54:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
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