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Three silhouettes of ghostly formCast their wicked spell,
To brave, bewildered Macbeth
They do tell,
Of power, more power to come.
Thane of Cawdor he shall be,
But what dark future
Erupts from Macbeth?
A twisted plot to
Kill, kill, kill,
Kill King Duncan in his dreams.
Sharp, bloody turmoil
Is poor Duncan's fate,
Betrayed by corrupt minds,
Stealthy serpents,
In his sleep.
The armor, what amor did see?
No longer will they be
As the twisted serpent strikes
Through his guilty mind, he bites
And Death whisks them away.
Two sons, brothers,
They flee,
Flee the venom of death
That lies in Duncan's veins.
Murderers three,
Sword in hand attack noble Banquo.
The bite of the swift, sharp blade,
Brings about his demise
As Fleance flees their sight.
A banquet, a feast.
Macbeth's words bring truth,
If only Banquo were present!
But what illusion is this?
What dark, cruel trick?
A writhling, fog of matter,
A vibrant, lifelike image.
Banquo lives! Look there! He sits!
The once stable bridge begins to crumble under
Macbeth's feet.
Witches, witches, witches!
Hecate! Hecate!
The dark, thick air is filled with magic,
As the ghostly forms cast their spell.
Spells upon spells
As the corrupt one approaches.
Three apparitions,
Beware, beware, beware!
Fife, child, creeping woods,
Beware, beware, beware!
The death of Fife's wife,
Lady Macduff and her son.
Anger, rage, revenge for Macduff.
Relive your worst pasts,
Lady Macbeth,
In your sleep.
Tell the observers your deep, dark secrets
Of your part in those awful deeds.
Blood, and more blood
Dripping down your hands.
Thick, dark life covers your pale skin,
Those hands shall never be wiped clean.
Farewell, good Wife!
Complete your end.
Battle, war
Is upon lonely Macbeth.
Bravado vs. bravery
Which ends in his death.
Macduff avenges wife and son
As crimson blood stains the ground.
The serpent's head shows as proof,
To the end of his bloody reign.
Victory over Macbeth!
Comments: 40
AshleyLeopard [2007-06-22 04:38:07 +0000 UTC]
Hang on, that totally didn't cover it. You have CRAZY talent!
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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2007-06-22 16:34:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!! My teacher wanted to keep a copy of it and use it as an example for her later classes.
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AshleyLeopard In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-23 01:27:06 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME! That happened to me once, too, in college. I did a paper on one of Pablo Neruda's sonnets, and the professor asked to use it as an example. XD
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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2007-06-23 01:53:55 +0000 UTC]
It's always neat when that happens. I've had it happen 2 times and both times it was for some creative writing thing.
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twentyonethirteen [2007-06-20 02:33:53 +0000 UTC]
It's pretty gloomy, but not having read Macbeth, I don't really know how the story goes.
But you did a pretty good job of telling the story x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-20 23:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Macbeth is all about betrayal and bloodyness..... .....that sort of stuff. You should read it!! It's very good!!
And thank you!!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-21 03:13:56 +0000 UTC]
It sounds great can't beat betrayal and blood. What more could you ask for!
x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-21 04:05:19 +0000 UTC]
Seriously!! Some people just don't know what they're missing!!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-21 16:19:29 +0000 UTC]
Hehe True.. true.. I mean... a voice like yours and the world doesn't get to hear it. I feel sorry for them
x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-22 00:33:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, some people get to hear my voice!!
Friends, family, that sort of thing. And people I just happen to grab on the street and strike up philosophical conversations with.....that sort of thing...
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-22 14:56:55 +0000 UTC]
Woo. If I was walking down the street, would you grab me and start a philosophical conversation with me? x
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-23 02:30:05 +0000 UTC]
Yay What would we talk about?
x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-23 03:11:07 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm........ *thinks* .............why do we do things we don't want to when we're with a group of people? ...........scientists have done studies, but don't seem to be able to draw any other conclusion than that we don't want to be the outcast.....why can't people go against the norm of society?.........
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-24 00:27:35 +0000 UTC]
Peer pressure is quite strong. Some people do go against the norm. I do, as a matter of fact.
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-24 03:53:12 +0000 UTC]
I guess so.....I normally don't go with the norm........I'm stubborn, so if I don't want to do something, I don't.
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-24 19:42:22 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. I'm not stubborn, I'm just weird. x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-25 04:02:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, every artist is a little weird!! I'm weird too!!..............and my sisters never let me forget it....... But that's ok! I'm fine with my weirdness!!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-25 14:46:23 +0000 UTC]
Damn straight. I wouldn't even talk to you if you weren't slightly weird x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-25 18:13:17 +0000 UTC]
But I always say that everyone is weird in their own way.
So there's no reason to not being at least nice to someone you think is weird!!
Tolerance is a hard thing to do, but a virtue non-the-less!!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-26 02:10:44 +0000 UTC]
Woo!
*virtuefull* x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-26 02:21:36 +0000 UTC]
.........Oh my God!! Speeking of virtues, my niece needs to learn the virtue of PATIENCE!!!!! I was going NUTS today because she was whining soooo much.....
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-26 02:29:21 +0000 UTC]
Awwh. I'm very patient
You should have gagged her can't whine if you can't talk
x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-26 20:57:50 +0000 UTC]
Same here.
I had actually thought of that, but my sister wouldn't appreciate it much. Spoil sport.....I did tell my niece though that it didn't matter how many times she "hmphed* at me, she'd still have to wait to get what she wanted.
That got her to be quiet for at least a little bit.
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-27 00:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, kids suck
Ligers, on the other hand.. = awesome x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-27 02:25:38 +0000 UTC]
I like kids......but sometimes I really want to disappear for a while. My best friend says I'm like Mother Goose....all the children flock to me!
True...ligers are very awesome!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-27 05:19:01 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. They can sense your motherly love x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-27 21:24:47 +0000 UTC]
Probably. I don't know how many times my nieces have called me mom! And my best friend's niece and nephews attack me when I walk in the door.
Sometimes it can be a curse!!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-28 01:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Anything attacking you has to be a gift from me (God) to me (James) x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-28 01:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Well, I dunno.....a lot of people have attacked me!
Mainly friends and children though!
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-28 20:46:32 +0000 UTC]
Hehe I don't blame them
x
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twentyonethirteen In reply to catnipkitty [2007-06-28 21:29:28 +0000 UTC]
Awwh, you know I love you realllyyyy x
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catnipkitty In reply to twentyonethirteen [2007-06-29 01:44:55 +0000 UTC]
I know! And I luuuuv you too!
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