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catnipkitty — To Be With Thee
Published: 2007-11-05 20:43:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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To be with thee,To be with thee
Through the most trecherous
Of seas
Would I swim,
To be with thee
Across the vastest
Of deserts
Would I trek,
To be with thee
Past the highest
Of mountains
Would I climb,
To be with thee
Through the winds
Of time
Would I travel,
To be with thee
For thee
Would I
Give up my life,
Sacrifice this
Mortal shell
To be with thee,
To be with thee...
Comments: 7
I love it! It sounds like a ballad; it's very lyrical. I get a mental image of a man softly strumming a lute and singing to his lady love.
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Thanks!! 
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Yes, I would agree it doesn't sound that bad @ all, and adds a warm touch to your writing style. Good job! 
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Nice little addition to your gallery. It's soft and works for a wide audience base.
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