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catnipkitty — Toying with Thoughts of Malice [NSFW]
Published: 2008-11-14 20:52:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 35; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description A vision of slit throats
gushing scarlet fluids
from throbbing arteries
escapes my thoughts
to find itself etched
into these pages of malice;
the black ink drips
from my quill as the
blood slides off
the knife, pooling
thick murder 'round
my booted feet...
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Comments: 12

RockerByBaby [2008-11-18 03:16:07 +0000 UTC]

"the black ink drips
from my quill as the
blood slides off
the knife" - cleverly effective.


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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2008-11-18 19:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you ma'am! I really do like this piece, even though it's a little disturbing....

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2008-11-18 21:57:50 +0000 UTC]

In an effective manner, I believe so.

Very much welcome!


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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2008-11-19 05:05:10 +0000 UTC]

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AshleyLeopard [2008-11-16 02:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Fabulous! Not too long, not too short, and it conjures images of Jack the Ripper and old-time murders committed in back alleys, before streetlamps were electric.

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2008-11-16 18:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ma'am! I was a little pissed off when I wrote it.

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grenedine [2008-11-15 01:05:46 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it needs a warning at all. The maturity thing would only apply if there was graphic imagery and even then I think it really applies to visual pieces, not so much literature. I think you're safe with this one.

It would be cool if you cold expand on this; I think there may be a bigger story behind it. Also, I don't know if you've heard of it, but this sounds a lot like "Johnny the Homicidal Maniac" by Jhonen Vasquez. Look it up, I think you may see the similarity.

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catnipkitty In reply to grenedine [2008-11-15 03:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thanks for letting me know! I appreciate your feedback! I'm just never sure and I don't want to get in trouble for not putting a warning or strict rating on it.

I thought about adding more onto it, but lost my train of thought when class started. I'll see what happens after I look at it again...perhaps something will come to me. I've never heard of it, but I'll definitely look it up!

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grenedine In reply to catnipkitty [2008-11-16 21:43:50 +0000 UTC]

As far as macabre goes, I think it may help.

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catnipkitty In reply to grenedine [2008-11-17 18:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Ok, well when I get some free time, I'll see what I can come up with.

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kitsune2022 [2008-11-14 21:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah, anger poetry. lD How I miss thee. I dig it.

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catnipkitty In reply to kitsune2022 [2008-11-14 22:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you ma'am! I'm glad you like it!

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