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catnipkitty — Tragic Cycles
Published: 2010-04-01 01:19:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description The nonchalant piano player died
and left a problematic child to stay
a speculative course, perpetual
in figurative transgressions, engrossed
in oceans heaving sighs of reverie.
Ungrateful orphan - frivolous and pale,
forgetful harlot soon to be - a smirk
besmears her face surrendering estranged,
promiscuous behavior - rigorous
heteronormativity for those
who want superfluous relationships.
A poor, infertile maiden cast upon
carnivorous philosophy - a ghost's
electric pulse, impervious to hope.
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Comments: 6

writingpoetryforlife [2010-04-17 14:11:23 +0000 UTC]

hey that was good I do have a hw assignment posted here on da from 08 check it out [link] did you get an A???

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catnipkitty In reply to writingpoetryforlife [2010-04-18 01:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I got an A, but I messed up one line so I'll have to revise it a bit. Thanks for the as well!! I really appreciate it!

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writingpoetryforlife In reply to catnipkitty [2010-04-19 01:39:20 +0000 UTC]

np im glad u got an A

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vital-organs [2010-04-16 20:12:48 +0000 UTC]

What a crazy assignment!! I can definitely appreciate the difficulty of fitting everything into iambic pentameter. 0.0

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catnipkitty In reply to vital-organs [2010-04-16 20:19:00 +0000 UTC]

It really was! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for much for the too! Means a lot to me!

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vital-organs In reply to catnipkitty [2010-04-16 20:19:58 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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