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Published: 2009-06-16 03:02:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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We three kings of orient are:one in a taxi, one in a car;
one who forgot to pay the rent;
another whose life is nearly spent;
one who is trapped in reverie;
one, when young, got stuck in a tree.
Together we come, together we go,
trav'ling through lands we never have known;
trekking through towns and over craggy peaks,
hoping to find the one we must meet.
We three kings of orient are:
lost in this city, can't see the star;
fixing our tire, 'cause it's bent,
griping at everyone, just to vent;
but thank goodness, how Heavenly;
the son of God before us, we see!
Comments: 16
ElegantFaith [2009-07-26 06:27:25 +0000 UTC]
This one is really good. It makes me think.
Your wording is really nice, too.
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catnipkitty In reply to ElegantFaith [2009-07-28 02:31:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again! It's always nice to hear that people enjoy my writing!
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AshleyLeopard [2009-07-11 22:20:54 +0000 UTC]
I like it a lot- thought-provoking, stays in a strange middle-ground of negativity and positivity. I don't feel like it was downer, it felt like a warning. Bravo!
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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2009-07-13 01:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
I wrote another poem last night (I'll be putting it up soon), so I don't feel quite so stagnant at the moment!
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RockerByBaby [2009-06-30 05:52:12 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of some happy captivating Christmas chant!
Lovely idea, especially while folding undies
Off to more of you! Take it easy dear, hope all is well!
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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-07-01 03:15:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it!
Things are going well here, thanks for asking! How are things on your end?
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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2009-07-05 08:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Good deal!
Stellaradicoolovely thank you!
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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-07-06 02:12:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad things are great on your end! And you're welcome!
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catnipkitty In reply to DuscaMei [2009-06-28 02:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
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JamesSnaith [2009-06-25 09:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Witty and funny... the first few lines brought back some fun memories from childhood...
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catnipkitty In reply to JamesSnaith [2009-06-26 03:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
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kitsune2022 [2009-06-16 21:23:03 +0000 UTC]
It's amusing! And very cute!
catnipkitty In reply to kitsune2022 [2009-06-17 02:16:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
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catnipkitty In reply to SugarAddict140 [2009-06-16 03:22:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad it made you laugh!
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