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Published: 2009-06-16 03:02:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description We three kings of orient are:
one in a taxi, one in a car;
one who forgot to pay the rent;
another whose life is nearly spent;
one who is trapped in reverie;
one, when young, got stuck in a tree.

Together we come, together we go,
trav'ling through lands we never have known;
trekking through towns and over craggy peaks,
hoping to find the one we must meet.

We three kings of orient are:
lost in this city, can't see the star;
fixing our tire, 'cause it's bent,
griping at everyone, just to vent;
but thank goodness, how Heavenly;
the son of God before us, we see!
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Comments: 16

ElegantFaith [2009-07-26 06:27:25 +0000 UTC]

This one is really good. It makes me think.
Your wording is really nice, too.

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catnipkitty In reply to ElegantFaith [2009-07-28 02:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again! It's always nice to hear that people enjoy my writing!

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AshleyLeopard [2009-07-11 22:20:54 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot- thought-provoking, stays in a strange middle-ground of negativity and positivity. I don't feel like it was downer, it felt like a warning. Bravo!

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catnipkitty In reply to AshleyLeopard [2009-07-13 01:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I wrote another poem last night (I'll be putting it up soon), so I don't feel quite so stagnant at the moment!

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RockerByBaby [2009-06-30 05:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of some happy captivating Christmas chant!

Lovely idea, especially while folding undies

Off to more of you! Take it easy dear, hope all is well!


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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-07-01 03:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Things are going well here, thanks for asking! How are things on your end?

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RockerByBaby In reply to catnipkitty [2009-07-05 08:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Good deal!

Stellaradicoolovely thank you!

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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-07-06 02:12:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad things are great on your end! And you're welcome!

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DuscaMei [2009-06-26 21:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's cute

What a fun little poem!

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catnipkitty In reply to DuscaMei [2009-06-28 02:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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JamesSnaith [2009-06-25 09:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Witty and funny... the first few lines brought back some fun memories from childhood...

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catnipkitty In reply to JamesSnaith [2009-06-26 03:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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kitsune2022 [2009-06-16 21:23:03 +0000 UTC]

It's amusing! And very cute! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

catnipkitty In reply to kitsune2022 [2009-06-17 02:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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SugarAddict140 [2009-06-16 03:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Haha! That's pretty good. It made me smile.

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catnipkitty In reply to SugarAddict140 [2009-06-16 03:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad it made you laugh!

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