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Published: 2009-12-25 04:44:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2307; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Standing amidst the drifting flakessettling themselves against the ground,
I marvel at their delicate beauty...
The cold tufts of snow tango
in the wind and applaud the
silent music: their clicking heals
only a faint hiss in the background.
Some land softly on my face,
bestowing tender kisses to my cheeks
that swiftly turn to diamond droplets
trickling off my chin;
others cling to my chestnut locks,
crowning my mane like a wreath of
white ivy.
In this paradise of snow,
I wish silently...
and, raising my lashes skyward,
I pray someone might hear me.
The cold wind stirs my hair
and bids me follow the same path;
my eyes wander the winter landscape -
across the crystal trees,
past the lily-white shrubs,
down to the snow-covered earth
where, peaking bravely above it,
four little, green leaves I spy.
My gaze shifts heavenwards once more
and a tear drifts down my cheek...
Thank you
Then I smile as I
pluck the clover from
its nest of snow...
Comments: 7
lost-lil-eskimo [2010-01-04 21:44:12 +0000 UTC]
...Beautiful! I read this a couple days ago but didn't have the time to comment. Still as stunning as the first time!
Congratulations again!
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catnipkitty In reply to lost-lil-eskimo [2010-01-04 21:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Aww! Thank you!!!
I'm glad you like it!
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saykha [2010-01-02 20:28:32 +0000 UTC]
Really beautifully written You'll definately have my vote for the competition
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catnipkitty In reply to saykha [2010-01-03 20:22:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
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