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CatSalinas — Old Work - The Pillars of Kalexius Chapter 2
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Interesting! It makes me want to learn more about the village and Debbie. Also the autumny colors really fit the folk-fairy setting being developed.
My critiques are: 1. The font choice seems too modern and juvenile, like it would fit a comic about schoolkids. For this, something a little more old-fashioned-looking would be better. 2. Debbie is facing and walking right in the first three panels, then in the last panel, she is facing and walking left. Unless you want to point out that for a particular reason, she turned around and walked in a different direction, this is confusing. It violates the 180-degree rule.
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
Very good critiques, I really appreciate you pointing them out to me! I'll keep them in mind
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You're welcome!
I hope it's helpful!
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