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Published: 2009-12-30 02:00:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 196; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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So this guy is surprised. I haven't used MSpaint for a while. Felt great to get back! Now that I think of it I'm glad I don't have a tablet. Imma really bad w/thoseTools: Mouse, Ms paint
Time: 2hrs
Critique would be loved
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My love for this piece stems solely for the method it was done. Using a mouse and MS Paint, you've managed to create an entire portrait including personality, tone, and character. The piece is very resembling of both paper cut-out and vector art, as with most good MS Paint pieces.
You used tones magnificently, painting a character using strange and dynamic shapes. My admiration goes to you in spots such as the neck, the cheeks, and the forehead. However, the effect was drastically lost in the most troublesome of places -- the mouth and nose. Suggestions to look out for in the future: study and practice. Keep an eye on where the light hits on the nose and put a hard edge on it. If all else fails -- follow the style of the piece. Using the solid lines drastically pulls away, even if it made anatomy more accurate.
Alas, one more drastic mention would be the top-right portion of his head. It ends too soon e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Lastly, just as a small suggestion, I would clean up the final product. The piece has so many white dots and little spots of uncolored section -- it drags the aesthetic value down.
Keep an eye out for style and you're good!
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful critique. Now that I looked at the picture after reading the critique, I realized the many things I could improve on. Thayou for noticing the white squares. I will do a better cleanup.
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^^ I would love to see a finished, cleaned version
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thanks how was your break?
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Okay so far. Haven't touched my homework yet, so maybe that's why...
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oh, wow. I'm surprised
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I'm not a homework freak. I just procrastinate till the last day
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Yes, well done. But I prefer with the resized (little) view. It's look more clear... Probably the blur effect.
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Ms paint seems to do that with the finnished pictures(make them blurry) I don't know why or how to solve that gliche. Suggestions?
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Perhaps you should asave your work as .png instead of jpg, jpg ruins the quality of the image
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lol sorry the last time I used Mspaint it's was when the first dot com domain name has been created... Maybe Photoshop (Cs4) should be better...
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Is that free? Or I could just try to get better w/ Coral paint(since I own that). But thankyou all the same
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I used Coral Paint long time ago, depend the version... But personally I prefer photoshop, and no, its not free... But if you have many artist friends I'm sure they can help you to find a free version... Also, photoshop is good for photo editing but for drawing, I'm not an expert
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thankyou, out of curiosity, how long have you been doing art?
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Traditionnal Art, a long time ago, since I can remember... In digital, I do marketing, website design, publicity, etc. since a long time too, but Digital photomanip, photos, etc. It's all new for me 
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i'm not better than you and ur two deviations are really good
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lol we are better in each of our domain 
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Ho little idea, maybe you could use "Print screen" option and copy/paste in an other (better) program and re-save...
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