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Published: 2014-09-10 01:09:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 39658; Favourites: 683; Downloads: 431
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to late for text, more coming soonAdded the Work in Progress Stages i had saved to my gallery as a handy gif file
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I wanted to give this 5/5 all around, but you asked for a critique- not for me to jerk you off. so allow me to say that this is one of my favorite cyberpunk pieces ever e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks for taking your time to write down your thoughts and sharing it with me.
As the artist of the piece i share a sickness many creative people do, once the image is finished all that is left over are the mistakes and things I could have done better next time.
Therefore it is reassuring to read that people actually like the image, because if i were to write my own critique it wouldn't even get close to being as favourable as yours.
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Don't be so hard in y'self, luv
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the buildings reminded me harkonnen's pyramid from dune 2000
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dune (at least the first book) is in general an awesome inspiration for me but here i thought more of a structure that looks massive and imposing while still being easy to fortify and blastwave resistant
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Good and interesting piece, I'd just tighten up the leather edges on the arm as your backgrounds have harder edges than the character in some places.
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heyho, sorry for the late reply, thanks a lot for taking your time and writing the critique.
you are totally rigth, and in hindsight i regret not taking the extra time to make the leather jacket "crisp" all around :/
anyways thanks a lot 
hope you like my other cyberpunk images too!
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While this is quite the amazing cyberpunk piece, something about the woman's body seems a bit off. I don't know if it's the angle of the head/face, or the size of the arm, but something seems... well, like I said, a little off.
Otherwise, like I said, pretty amazing.
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heyho, thanks a lot for your feedback, you're right anatomy is still a huge problem for me and sadly i do not have enogh hours in the day to practice it as much as i'd like to.
But my journey didn't end with this one image so there's still a lot to improve and one day I'll be out of the uncanney valley of anatomy
Thanks for your comment and glad you took the time to take a 2nd look at the image
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Meine Güte, das ist der Hammer, du hast dich wirklich weiterentwickelt.
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haha, danke sehr, ist aber noch viel zu tun
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danke und vielen dank nochmal für deine ratschläge und einflüsse
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Really awesome !
The armor is awesome, the girl face is awesome,the arcologies are awesome, the red button is awesome, everything is awesome !
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haha thanks, glad you like it so much
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You're welcome !
Well it's an awesome pic I can only like it that much x)
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I like the "Ready, Aim, Fire!" dynamic of the picture! Very cool looking.
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Daaang shes got a ton of firepower at her disposal lol - i love this. Makes me want to know the story.
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I will do more in the cyberpunk settin, but have no plans yet to connect every image with an overarching narrative.
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