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God made me perfect but insaneWithout me there is no God
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I like the contradiction between the two lines, very nicely worded
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I feel as if you could use a few commas in there...
It's quite interesting how... it contrasts, in a sense. It juxtaposes with each other and it's sort of paradoxical as well, almost.
I think both statements are quite true.. or rather, the second one is more whereas the first is quite questionable and subjective?
Intriguing stuff, I must say.
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We'll return to it and see if there should be commas. Thank you for your comment
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Thank you! For comments as well as 
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welcome! :laplz:
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