sempiterna [2011-01-16 20:08:43 +0000 UTC]

The passing of one person made the anger of the other towards them fade away, very good way to tell it using so few words

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3wyl [2011-01-09 20:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, that's interesting.

I'm reminded of Romeo and Juliet when I read this, actually... It's like, once the person has gone, the other can move forward and stuff, in a way. That's how I see it, anyway.

I like the concept and your choice of words. They sum it up quite well, especially with the atmosphere and all.

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