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celestial-elevator — Please Stop
Published: 2010-11-17 20:52:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Please…

I will lay down my life for you
Forfeit my independence

You will be my only one
My only breath
My bleeding heart
I'll lay it on a plate for you
So you can decide if it should beat
Or not

If you just hold on
I will look into your eyes
Without seeing the monster
That I thought you were

Shh
Don't speak
No more
Just stay and hold me
And I will ignore
Your cold embrace
The metal arms around me
Just don't go

My love
That is what you are
I said no to you and you left
Not again
Don't leave me

I will change my core
And my soul
Only for you
As long as you stay
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Comments: 2

sempiterna [2010-11-22 18:35:59 +0000 UTC]

The last stanza is particularly powerful
I would of used something like 'give up everything'

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celestial-elevator In reply to sempiterna [2010-11-22 19:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you again. I'm a little unsure of this poem, wasn't entirely sure I'd submit it.

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