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celestial-elevator — Rapid Thinking
Published: 2010-02-07 08:37:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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glass, righttight on my
skin, thin veil
between you and me
see? can't be
human or true
to. you.
who am I?
will I die?
by my bed
a cage. of led
alone. a crone
in the mirror
I'm serious
I'm delirious
help me out
I will s h o u t ! I
need a home
not this dome
won't weep
too steep
but I
count sheep
at least
I sleep
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Comments: 4
You've managed to get the feeling of it being rapid really well in this, with the short, broken lines
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You rapidly think with lone comprehension, because I don't understand at all. Then again, I don't understand some of my thoughts. But you took your thoughts and made a artwork that is admirable. Huzzah!
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Well, these are my thought, and they don't always make sense either, so I'm not surprised the poem doesn't 
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