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Published: 2011-03-01 19:12:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description you look deep into my eyes
I've no makeup for you
no blush
no powder
my skin is real and
you glance at it
your gaze returns

why is that?

I do, however, have this
feeling
that with any lipstick
mascara or shadow
I'd still be totally

naked for you
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Comments: 7

sempiterna [2011-05-01 17:31:20 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, the idea and the way you've written it works great

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celestial-elevator In reply to sempiterna [2011-05-01 17:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks for the fav

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sempiterna In reply to celestial-elevator [2011-05-01 18:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Always welcome

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TheDarkenedBride [2011-03-22 22:00:02 +0000 UTC]

very pretty

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Kimmy-of-the-Darkk [2011-03-03 04:06:11 +0000 UTC]

This has the feel of a haiku, though it is much longer. You have, effectively, captured a moment in time, a raw feeling, capturing a breath in amber. The result is captivating.

Bravo.

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celestial-elevator In reply to Kimmy-of-the-Darkk [2011-03-03 13:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Kimmy-of-the-Darkk In reply to celestial-elevator [2011-03-04 23:54:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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