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AGHH. Sorry for the slow updates and crapness of them OTL I swear it gets better 3
Entasy (c) *celestialDeception and *Scribble-Demon
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Comments: 10
Suki-chan36 [2012-08-09 18:32:33 +0000 UTC]
I think this page is quite good! The only thing I can think of to point out is the second speech bubble; it currently reads "Don't be out to long, dont embarass yourself-", when it should say "Don't be out too long, don't embarrass yourself-".
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celestialDeception In reply to Suki-chan36 [2012-08-09 18:44:44 +0000 UTC]
I didn't write that part, didn't even think of looking it over x'D Thanks *runs off to fix*
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Suki-chan36 In reply to celestialDeception [2012-08-10 15:36:44 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Happy to help.
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YukoISBadMedicine [2012-08-09 05:43:34 +0000 UTC]
Don't sell yourself short, it's not crappy. Much better then what I can do. ^^
I am interested to see what happens next. That animation sparked a lot of curiosity now lol.
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YukoISBadMedicine In reply to celestialDeception [2012-08-09 18:48:13 +0000 UTC]
Just keep drawing and you will see improvement too.
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