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Published: 2004-11-14 01:28:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 11827; Favourites: 389; Downloads: 57
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Darkness falls upon your roomI sneak in to grant your doom
Ever-so-slowly you close your eyes
Unaware of your soon demise
Now you've fallen into a deep sleep
And pretty soon your soul I shall keep
Away from your neck I move your hair
Your life is so young, almost doesn't seem fair
But into your neck I sink my fangs
And in the air the smell of blood hangs
Your tan complexion turns quite pale
As you feel your soul drift to the depths of Hell
Your once mortal life has escaped your hand
For now you live a life among the damned
Slowly you wake and rise out of bed
You feel so lost for your soul is dead...
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Comments: 78
This can be a song, because I singed the whole thing. Well done!!
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awesome poem. I wonder I there's a werewolf poem.
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Cool poem! D'you mind if I turn it into a song? Its very inspirational!
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I don't see how this would suggest a need for therapy at all.
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Hello,
I am searching for Vampire / Drakula images, and songs all over the internet, for a Fanzine i make. I like this one.
My fanzine is in Serbian Language, it's called "Raketla", whitch means Rocket. It is a SF Fanzine, and the 3rd one is a Vampire Special. If you would like to see it published, please send it to me (konkurs@sf-serbia.com) with a permission to publish text file.
You can see the first 2 numbers of Raketla Fanzine:
#1: [link]
#2: [link]
Thanx in advance...
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i like this poem very much. i dont think u need therapy at all lol. but some of the poems i write people say i need help too but just cuz you write a weird poem doesnt mean u need help, its just a poem lol.
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oh my god i love the whole thing but i cant get over " your once mortal life has escaped your hand
for now you live a life among the damned
slowly you wake and rise out of bed
you feel so lost for your soul is dead..."
its so good !! some of my friends have suggested therapy too .......
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This is truly amazing! A peice of art i must say! You are so detailed! Its like im the vampire and then suddenly im the victim! I can feel the sadness but i can also feel were there is no mercy. this is obvously a old vampire, who doesnt have the joy to care, but can pity and understand
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It's... it's.... it's AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
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I loe this poem...kinda reminds me of what im going through...a hell on earth =.= lol love it!
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Excellent poem and choice of words. I really enjoyed the tone
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i like it but i love vampires so aside from the writing i have to say you chose a good topic..... this is so going on my favorites list
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wow really really good. whoever said you needed should just shut up and not give opinions! great job!
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I like it. You soo don't need therapy, some people just don't know what good poetry is.
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so well and nicely written! and i'm a fan of vampires so...fave! again, good job!
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very nice! Congratulations! I love it! Maybe it can be a song!
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You're a really good writer. I really love this poem!
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loved it and i agree a secul would b nice forgive 4 typoes im bad at spelling anyone who says u need theerapy obviously doesnt see that you have an imagination, talent (A LOT), and a soul. sounds weird but yes you can only write stuff truly deep with a soul no im not emo or goth i just no alot who r and am in deep understanding of the love of poetry hope u eep writing
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i get exactly whutt your sayin! its not that your crazy but its just whutt comes from you!!
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