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Cerebrobullet-art — Battle Royal Round 1 part 1
Published: 2010-11-22 22:34:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1141; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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LOL OH GODS THIS WAS... CHALLENGINGBut it was fun.
There is a LOT I need to improve upon. Pacing, dialogue... just the drawings in general. But I want to do it again, which I guess is good. This tournament is... for srs practice for me. I hope, if I get to advance, that each time my comics will get better. I hope.
So, I seriously apologize right now if this doesn't make sense ><. It needs a lot of work. I rushed, yeah *deep breath* but here it is.
Alloy belongs to ~hoveroad , who was my awesome opponent. Go check out her entry! [link]
Edit: our little evil autobot friend is named MECHRONALD (caps required) and belongs to everyone who helped name him in the livestream!
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Flashbacks need strobe lights!!!
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Pfft... This is awsummm XD
Also alot better than mine.. It didn't like me. At all. TT^TT
And is those last 2 panels related to her history?
You made her look epic XD
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ah, thank you ><
I liked it! It had a good perspective! ^^
ah, yes. I was thinking that Phantom holding her down would trigger her memories
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XD But seriously.. It looks so bad >.<
It probably would XD
And the mech's name could be Fore, or Steelspark, take your pick XD
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:< dun say that
Steelspark is an epic name, I like that ^^
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It doessss >.<
:3 I made them up in R.E. Thats when most of my ideas come. 'Cuz we do nothing XD
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>:C
I have... classes like that XD
BTW, your icon makes me happy whenever I see it XD
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:3
XD. R.E and Math are my 'do nothing and come up with stuff' classes XD
Aww, yay! XD
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Oh man, that's... every class except my art classes for me XD
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English is too busy and Science is fun :3
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ENVY AT YOUR AWESUM SKILLZZZZZZZZZ DX It makes total sense you silly, this looks great! I love the sketchiness X3
Gawd, his hands must hurt like Pit.
Primus, he loves dem femmes doesn't he? XD *Frigid death glare from the stands*
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Baah, yours has more atmosphere and better coloring :< *rushed too much*
I'm glad it does ><. I've never done a comic before so... combining everything I've taught myself was interesting XD
Eh... he's used to pain now XD
LOL I wrote it before they had... anything together! XD
Even so, he'll always be a bit of a flirt. Kind of an old habit for him now |D
*Phantom hides behind the wall*
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A dark hallway vs an arena.... I think your's wins xD *loves coloring*
Really? Couldn't tell this was your first time XD You did good!
Awwwwww, so that means Frigid doesn't have to make him feel better afterwards |D
LOL! Do they even have a thing?
Try telling that to Frigid XDXDXD
*Frigid growls, stalking towards the wall*
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My arena is just... scribbles and shapes, though! XD I need to make some nice pre-made backgrounds to use... or, like.. stock crowds ><
YOURS WAS DARK AND CREEPY. You had suspense :<
that's encouraging, then ^^
oooooh no, he'd totally play it up if she was around XD
"Oh, Frigid, my hand hurts. Can you fix it? 
I... I think so! XD PHANTOM LIKES TO THINK SO.
*Phantom whimpers a little and slides down more*
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That would definitely help time wise XD
Spooooky XD
Totally X3
LOL! Then they do CX
*Frigid: Oh Phanny. Come. out. >C*
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If I make crowds, I'm filling it with characters I know |D *already included Skipbeat and Retrovirus*
XD THEN HE'D CRY FOR SYMPATHY AND HUGS
Phantom: :< *peaks over the edge* H-hi? *stupid smile*
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Best way to do it |D
Lol! She'd tease him before giving him lotsa kisses and hugs, cuz you know she doesn't give things up easy XD
Frigid: *looks down at him, not amused* So. Interesting match.
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XD he would withstand any teasing for a kiss |D
Phantom: *slowly stands up and fidgets with his servos, looking at the ground* I, uhm... didn't notice... you... in the stands. *glances up*
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I bet he would XD
Frigid: Uh huh. And that automatically gives you permission. *she taps the wall a bit, getting his attention* Answer me this; where do you think we stand?
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Frigid has got so much control over him XD
Phantom: I didn't mean it.. like... uhm *cowers a little, then frowns, looking up at her* You know, I don't really know that myself.
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No kidding XD Maybe she should tone it down a bit, but he makes it too easy XD
Frigid: I know you didn't, I just can't help but feel... *leans on the wall, her face thoughtful* How about we clear that one up?
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naaaaw, Phantom needs to be whipped XD. Otherwise he's lost.
Phantom: *narrows his optics a little, frowning nervously* You have an idea of how we might? *swipes the energon off his face*
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Lol, she'll be able to do it then XD
Frigid: *smiles* I think so. But I have to know what you feel about this.
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Phantom: *furrows his browplates* It's not... exactly easy for a mech to express his feelings, you know.
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Frigid: And yet its easy for a mech to flirt shamelessly with any femme he sees. *she looks up at him, searching his optics. she was blunt* But I'll make it a bit easier. I want to be more than friends.
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Phantom: *his optics drop for a moment, ashamed, before casts them to the side in an angry glare* if it's any consolation, I'm always denied. *He looks back at her, giving a small smile to pass it off as a joke. It drops a little, his optics widening* o... oh. I... yes. I mean, I.. I do.. Or would, or.. yes.
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Frigid: *her expression doesn't change* Really? I mean, do you really want to?
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Phantom: *looks up at her silently for a few moments, then reaches out to take her servo, his optics bright* Yes. I want to... a lot.
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Frigid: *finally smiles, rubbing his servos* Then it's settled. *she leans forward, her optics dimmed slightly* How about we make it offical?
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Phantom: *his optics brighten, mouth stretching instantly into a child-like smile. Even so, his faceplate is a little red from nerves* How... do we do that?
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Frigid: *laughs lightly as she leans down, brushing her lips against his* As if you didn't know...
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Phantom: ...
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Frigid: *smirks, watching him. when he landed beside her, she reached up and flicking his nose* Yep. A silly, easily flustered, clumsy, sweet mech.
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Phantom: *leans back to try and dodge the flick, retaliating by clasping his servos around her waist* I guess you must consider those all good qualities, huh?
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Frigid: For the most part. *she leans forward towards him, wrapping her arms around his neck, smirking playfully* And I wouldn't have you any other way.
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Phantom: *lets out a small laugh, leaning his forehead against hers* you... *pauses, his face becoming serious* you... have no idea how happy you make me.
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Frigid: *was speechless for once, looking up into his optics, searching. his words surprised her. never had she been anyone's source of happiness, nor has she ever felt something like this for anyone. she gives him a geniune but teasing smile.* You really are a glutton for punishment, aren't you? *she lightly rubs noses with him, keeping her forhead resting on his* But in all seriousness... you've become a monumental part of my life, Phan..
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Phan: *laughs a little at her comment. It was probably true.* You're very nice to me too, though. And... *bows his head a little* I'm glad, that... well *lets out a breath* I'm not very good at this, but I'm glad we're together.
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Frigid: Me too. *smiles, kissing his cheek* You're doing fine. If I expected perfection, I wouldn't be here. *she looks up at him, smiling earnestly* Besides, I prefer having you just the way you are.
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Phan: *smiles* Thank you. *looks to the side nervously* So, what are our plans for the evening?
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Frigid: *shrugs* Nothing really. Didn't expect this to happen. *smirks up at him.* How about you? Have any ideas?
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Phan: Well *crosses his optics to look up towards his cracked helm* would you mind performing some minor repairs *nervous laugh* I know that's not very romantic, but...
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Frigid: *laughs* No problem at all. Besides, can't go anywhere looking like that, can we? *taps his chest* Lean down, I can't reach.
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Phan: *gives a thankful smile, leaning down so she can reach* Shorty.
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Frigid: *pouts and flicks his forehead hard* Meanie. Do you want me to fix you or not?
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Phantom: OW *pulls back and pouts down at her* well now you owe it to me, you made it worse!
(HEY *cough* is it ok if I include Frigid/Blanche in the next battle comic? 
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Frigid: *sticks her glossa at him* You had it coming and you know it! But, *Turns away pouting* If you don't want me to fix you, you can get some crusty old mech to do it.
(Of courseee!!! Which form? Cuz technically you can use Blanche or Frigid's actual form 
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