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For Fire and Steel project.Related content
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Что-то египетское в облике дамы со змеей!) Прикольный костюм!)
Прочитала пространный комментарий внизу, на счет того, что все плосковато и нет контраста текстур. Я пожалуй соглашусь, работа получилась графичная, одинаково детализированная во всех местах, хочется еще уточнить освещение, в тенях объединить. Например, на платке головном: на нем все складки одинаково резкие и смотрится из-за этого немного неестественно, хочется часть их увести в тень, часть более выпукло обозначить светом) и да, волосы даме тоже хочется поправить, чтобы читались по материалу как волосы)
И фон еще более нюансным сделать, особенно фрагмент фона за рукой со змеей)
не знаю насколько понятно выразила мыслю, но как-то так)
хотя такой стиль тоже может быть, видела схожие по манере работы где-то на сиджихабе еще)
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That was really something to be admired...got a great gallery too.
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Love all the detail that's gone into her outfit.
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очень здорово. приятно поразглядывать детальки и цвет хороший.
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Hmm. Your usual master work, very well balanced in form and color and with great details as well.
For me, though, it's missing something, and I finally figured out what it is; the whole picture has almost no texture contrast. With the possible exception of her tunic cloth and laminated blade, everything seems to be the same matte-gloss texture, like the pewtery metallics of model paint.
I assume, since you've been a damn good artist for years and don't usually do things this way, that despite the solar title there are storyline reasons we see no full sunbeams here, and no full mirror-gloss metal surfaces catching a spark or edge of light against a shadow-dark background.
But as a result, the picture feels flat to me (a matter of personal taste, yes?) and doesn't really draw my eye into reacting the way, say, the hair of your Tywin Lannister talks to/with the soft dark of his collars, or the shine of your Triss's hair and forehead makes the ropes of the creature holding her more fibrous-dull, and vice versa.
So, hmm, I don't know if this is an actual crit or just an idle comment on personal taste, but since it's unlike your usual work I thought I'd mention it.
Your fan, as always,
--Nonie
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Thank you very much!
I'll think about it.
I had an idea about light and shadow, and reflected light, but it seems it can not be read, or too difficult, it is not clear.
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Hmm. I'm not talking about what is/isn't creating contrast, so much as how narrow the range of the resulting contrast is. But I'm probably misunderstanding what you're saying.
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Wow, this is magnificent! I like everything about this, especially her gloves and your overall attention to detail, Very nice work and keep it up!
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