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Feeding myselfTo the Fire
Of Life
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Comments: 18
krystletwystd [2005-05-18 15:41:34 +0000 UTC]
mmm...tasty levels of metaphor and sy mbolism here...
Like pie...apple pie....with ice cream...
I'm almost done critiquing your story, I have like...a page left, I think...>_< Then I'll type in the rest of the comments/changes and e-mail it to you...
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Chains In reply to krystletwystd [2005-05-19 22:24:32 +0000 UTC]
I like pie. With or without ice cream.
It means at least three different things to me all at the same time.
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krystletwystd In reply to Chains [2005-05-20 13:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Pi/e
is good
[and long]
It means 3.75 and a duck things to me.
But I'm a little braindead right now, so I'm not sure.
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oh-no-photos [2005-05-15 06:17:08 +0000 UTC]
Short and sweet. You're such a talented writer! .. and thank you for the fav', I'm too tired to leave the comment on the font page for you, haha.
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Chains In reply to oh-no-photos [2005-05-15 11:03:25 +0000 UTC]
Aww Thanks Glad you liked it.
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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-04-28 04:56:10 +0000 UTC]
Depends on who you ask. *L*
As far as I'm concerned, I'm doing fine.
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ShadowStrider In reply to Chains [2005-05-03 06:54:34 +0000 UTC]
*laughs* i hear ya there. I'm glad to hear that.
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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-04 04:39:25 +0000 UTC]
Like the new signature line. The scars of old wounds are worse than the wounds themselves, sometimes.
Glad to see that you are finding the time to write again. I don't always like what you write or understand where you're going with some things, but you are good at it.
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ShadowStrider In reply to Chains [2005-05-07 04:19:23 +0000 UTC]
sometimes I dont like what i write or where i am going with it, if it makes you feel any better. *laughs* I'm glad to hear from ya.
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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-08 06:01:18 +0000 UTC]
*shrugs* I'm always willing to talk to anyone that wants to talk to me.
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ShadowStrider In reply to Chains [2005-05-24 10:48:04 +0000 UTC]
anytime you want to, just let me know.
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TaintedQuiet [2005-04-05 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]
even though it is short it does carry several meanings. Wonderfully done. sometimes the most is said when little speech has left the lips.
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Chains In reply to TaintedQuiet [2005-04-05 06:32:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment and the Fav.
One of the things about shorts like this is that they are more open to interpertation and a longer piece. I generally like to nail down exactly what I mean, a habit that tends to irritate people since I do the same in conversation. They try to figure out what I mean because noone ever says what they mean anymore and, since I do, they always get it wrong.
In this case, I meant several different things all at once. It saysa different things to each person but it says all of them to me.
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TaintedQuiet In reply to Chains [2005-04-05 09:43:10 +0000 UTC]
Well it worked wonderfully. Glad you chose to share that with us.
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