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Published: 2005-04-03 23:00:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 520; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description Feeding myself
To the Fire
Of Life
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Comments: 18

krystletwystd [2005-05-18 15:41:34 +0000 UTC]

mmm...tasty levels of metaphor and sy mbolism here...

Like pie...apple pie....with ice cream...


I'm almost done critiquing your story, I have like...a page left, I think...>_< Then I'll type in the rest of the comments/changes and e-mail it to you...

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Chains In reply to krystletwystd [2005-05-19 22:24:32 +0000 UTC]

I like pie. With or without ice cream.
It means at least three different things to me all at the same time.

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krystletwystd In reply to Chains [2005-05-20 13:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Pi/e
is good
[and long]

It means 3.75 and a duck things to me.
But I'm a little braindead right now, so I'm not sure.

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oh-no-photos [2005-05-15 06:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Short and sweet. You're such a talented writer! .. and thank you for the fav', I'm too tired to leave the comment on the font page for you, haha.

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Chains In reply to oh-no-photos [2005-05-15 11:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww Thanks Glad you liked it.

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ShadowStrider [2005-04-27 22:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Nice. How ya been?

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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-04-28 04:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Depends on who you ask. *L*
As far as I'm concerned, I'm doing fine.

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ShadowStrider In reply to Chains [2005-05-03 06:54:34 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* i hear ya there. I'm glad to hear that.

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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-04 04:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Like the new signature line. The scars of old wounds are worse than the wounds themselves, sometimes.
Glad to see that you are finding the time to write again. I don't always like what you write or understand where you're going with some things, but you are good at it.

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ShadowStrider In reply to Chains [2005-05-07 04:19:23 +0000 UTC]

sometimes I dont like what i write or where i am going with it, if it makes you feel any better. *laughs* I'm glad to hear from ya.

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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-08 06:01:18 +0000 UTC]

*shrugs* I'm always willing to talk to anyone that wants to talk to me.

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ShadowStrider In reply to Chains [2005-05-24 10:48:04 +0000 UTC]

anytime you want to, just let me know.

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Chains In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-25 05:14:46 +0000 UTC]

The same.

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teen-deviant [2005-04-10 09:19:18 +0000 UTC]

mmm...very thought provocing..

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Chains In reply to teen-deviant [2005-04-13 07:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TaintedQuiet [2005-04-05 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]

even though it is short it does carry several meanings. Wonderfully done. sometimes the most is said when little speech has left the lips.

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Chains In reply to TaintedQuiet [2005-04-05 06:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and the Fav.

One of the things about shorts like this is that they are more open to interpertation and a longer piece. I generally like to nail down exactly what I mean, a habit that tends to irritate people since I do the same in conversation. They try to figure out what I mean because noone ever says what they mean anymore and, since I do, they always get it wrong.

In this case, I meant several different things all at once. It saysa different things to each person but it says all of them to me.

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TaintedQuiet In reply to Chains [2005-04-05 09:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Well it worked wonderfully. Glad you chose to share that with us.

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