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Published: 2012-12-22 17:11:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1420; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 2
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Description Just a few thought I had about latest 'Chakra' pages.

Geez.... C.Y.... Don’t be such Drama Queen....
I think that she was just lame... A sword is not a rocket and does not change directions because the target moved. All she had to do was to jump away. And it’s not that complicated. It’s a bit like dodge ball. You see a ball going at you and you have seconds to react. C.Y. apparently does not think that fast. And she had some time to react. Led stood close to her, but there’s always this distance that he had to cover. And on the page he is not that close. Besides... If C.Y. asks Motyl to throw her the Sword and then is not able to do anything because her powers are not working... Then maybe, indeed, she is useless. If she needs her supernatural powers to do something as simple as jumping away from the Sword. C.Y.! You just realized that without your powers you’re as useful to the Chakra Gang as a bicycle is useful to a fish! How do you feel about it?

What? Why the hell did he stop?
Why did you, Ushi? Why? In my opinion he could just ram Hielo and keep running after Cheetah. He’s a bull for Pete’s sake! He’s two times bigger than Hielo and almost three times heavier! That tells something! So why did he stop? A determined bull does not stop before smaller obstacle. I know. My uncle used to have a bull and I’ve seen with my own eyes as this bull rammed neighbour’s cow. Just like that. And Ushi also has freaking huge horns! You could have pierces Hielo and just push him away. Seriously! Unless they’re just a decoration. But still I have no idea why you stopped. I’m not an expert in bovine behaviour, but if someone is stupid enough to jump in front of a charging bull, then they should know the consequences. Just imagine is that would happen: Hielo being shoved away and wounded by Ushi. I bet the look on his face would be priceless!

And congratulations *ARVEN92 ! You just reached yout 100th page! Where is the cake? We shall have a party!
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Comments: 10

Zalay02 [2015-05-14 07:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, this is so funny XD

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akariwolf123 [2013-02-06 03:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Have more

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HAUAL [2013-01-27 00:14:15 +0000 UTC]

lol so true! xDD

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JaydenTheThunderWolf [2013-01-26 23:31:42 +0000 UTC]

You should've included cheetah's reaction to Ushi when he said "holy cow, he's huge"

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ARVEN92 [2012-12-24 18:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Ohoho! This totally made my day!

But you do have some fair points there, I especially agree with you on Ushi stopping XD Maybe Hielo told him: "Ushi, what are u doing. Ushi, STAHP!" XD But seriously, I actually wasn't considering his "bull side" at all while drawing this XD You're right, a bull wouldn't stop charging just because someone stepped in his way

And now for DRAMA QUEEN C.Y.! You know, I was thinking the exact same thing and with the exact same face as your character's while I was drawing that scene XD When I saw this picture, I literally rolled on the floor laughing XD But again, you're right, it WAS quite n00b of C.Y. to ask Motyl to throw the Sword at her and then not catch it She needs to work on tactics XD

I really really enjoyed this funny critique, it definitely put a smile on my face as well as it made me think thank you SO much for making it! And merry Christmas Pati ^_^

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NeverHill In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-01-27 12:43:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you knew it's not that serious. I was worried for a while that you might thing it's dead serious. I would never want to insult you or anything.

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ARVEN92 In reply to NeverHill [2013-01-29 22:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww it's alright my friend, you didn't insult me at all
And even if it was serious, I still gladly accept any critique ^_^

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LawinPL [2012-12-22 17:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Nie powinnaś robić z wszystkeigo krytyki lD

Może autor chciał by sie sstalo tak a nie tak

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Chakra-Polish In reply to LawinPL [2012-12-22 18:24:07 +0000 UTC]

To nie jest poważna krytyka. I Arven (mam nadzieje) zdaje sobie z tego sprawę. To są raczej takie moje dziwne rozmyślania na czym Świat stoi. Ja jej nie każę niczego zmieniać, ale są takie sytuacje (i to nawet w poważnych filmach), że człowiek się za głowę chwyta, bo przedstawiona sytuacja wymyka się nieco realiom.

'Może autor chciał by się stało'. No przecież! Podejrzewam, że Arven nie chciałaby, żeby Ushi stratował Hielo, bo to by było okropne z punktu widzenia całokształtu komiksu. Główni bohaterowie tak po prostu mają, że naginają pewne prawdy istniejące w świecie. I jakby to wyglądało?

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LawinPL In reply to Chakra-Polish [2012-12-22 18:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Ahh no tak lD masz racje ^^

no wlasnie lD
Lubie te twoje krytyki :3

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