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For 's collab event.You people should all go join now! There are tons of open slots!
I know the anatomy isn't perfect, but I'm happy and I've improved.
Piketooth of Riverclan, my all time favorite less loved warrior. ^^
Enjoy!
character to the Erins
art to me
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Comments: 21
Saberstar1 [2012-01-19 22:20:57 +0000 UTC]
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I personally think that this is a wonderful peice. I love the use of shading and highhlighting. The pattern on the pelt is wonderful. I think if anything could be fixed it might be the head. It looks just a tad too small for the neck. The eyes are amazing. I really love how you draw the ears. I also liked how you added multiple colors to the patern on his pelt and gave him claw slits. It just made it that much more .............I don't know the word I'm looking for exactly.... I just noticed however that it is leaning slightly foward. I'm not sure if that was how it was made to be but It is a wonderful peice.
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chameleocoonJ In reply to Saberstar1 [2012-01-19 22:52:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique! I agree with everything you said. ^^
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Saberstar1 In reply to chameleocoonJ [2012-01-19 23:01:09 +0000 UTC]
anytime. I would like to see if you get better.
....and I know you will.
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Teahorse [2011-11-25 20:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh. My. STARCLAN!
This is absolutely amazing, CammyJ!! Pike looks absolutely amazing!
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chameleocoonJ In reply to Teahorse [2011-11-25 23:03:00 +0000 UTC]
ha ha, thank you!!
I can't wait to see how your background goes. ^^
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Teahorse In reply to chameleocoonJ [2011-11-25 23:18:20 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
And actually, Lauf is going to help me with a lot of it, so I won't be doing it all by myself. But yes! Wish us luck!
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chameleocoonJ In reply to Teahorse [2011-11-25 23:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Well, both of you are good at BGs, so ti can't go bad!!
... or can it? *twilight zone music*
LOL XD
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Teahorse In reply to chameleocoonJ [2011-11-25 23:29:21 +0000 UTC]
:rolf: LOL! Let's hope not! xD
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Teahorse In reply to Teahorse [2011-11-25 20:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Ooops. Multiple 'amazing's. Ah well.
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silverfeather11 [2011-11-20 02:56:01 +0000 UTC]
Looks great! I think it looks a little big catish though... but aside from that it is awesome!
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chameleocoonJ In reply to silverfeather11 [2011-11-20 03:36:54 +0000 UTC]
thanks! It's probably because of his fangs and the mouth in general, he he. ^^
I'm happy with it though, as I've improved a lot.
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silverfeather11 In reply to chameleocoonJ [2011-11-20 13:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Yes that is very true and you indeed have improved!
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chameleocoonJ In reply to ClimbToTheStars [2011-11-20 02:17:04 +0000 UTC]
thanks! I love your icon! ^^
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