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ChanceofClouds — Commission - Aries and Circuit
Published: 2012-02-21 06:01:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 977; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 10
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Forkfdalsalaf This took way longer than it should have. -_-; I hope I don't get slower each time.
Sorry if there's any mistakes! Aries and Circuit are just so...decorous. XD I actually had to do the colors instead of the lineart first! (So there's no lineart to give this time, sorry
Circuit belongs to *NightOttsel
Aries belongs to *Saftkalas
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Ssrkfkjdvnlk I'd give ya critique but I'm terrible (I would just leave you confused instead of helping).
But I can give ya advices of some sort?
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Well, it depends! What are you unsatisfied with?
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Hmmm...Poses, placement and size comparisons for this particular picture I guess. Coloring and lineart is a different matter.
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The poses are fine, even though I don't see why she's raising her foot like that.
About proportions, Circuit's head and body look a bit large compared to Aries'. His legs also seem to be a little longer than hers (but because of he's sitting is not noticeable).
Uh.. What do you mean by placement?
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Um, it's kinda based on that silly old pose where a couple is kissing and the girl lifts up her leg. XD
Yeah, I gotta work on that sort of consistency.
Just like...how they're placed together? It feels weird or something.
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They look nice like that. But I think you could cut out some of the "empty" space around them, so the viewer focuses more on the characters (don't know how to explain that).
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I actually really love a lot of empty space. I dunno, it's like I can breathe or something. XD But I do understand your reasoning.
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XDD I know what you mean, but you do have to get rid of that empty space.
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Mm, maybe I should change the background then too. It looks gross if I just crop it. XD
I'll keep it like this for now though.
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XDDD Hey if you make the circles smaller it won't look crappy.
Fine, fine!
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Yeah, that was what I was thinking.
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Aw hahaha, Aries' expression is very very cute actually.
Details, yay! xD
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I think you captured them brilliantly hun! they buth look so cute in such a cute moment. I know they can be detailed little buggers but you done an awesome job on them both I love Aries' expression <3 Thank you!
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You're welcome! I'm happy they came out alright. ^^
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Aww! Now this is just precious, looks at Aries pouty face! XD Really love the way you've drawn them, details are nice and they just look so bloody adorable! <3
No worries about taking so long hun, it was worth the wait! Thankies very muchly <3
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You are very welcome as usual!
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