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Description
Name: Scourge
Age: 2009
Rank: Captain
Blood Colour: Red
Gender: none (she/her usually, but any pronouns are fine)
Species: Havem.exe [CLICK FOR SPECIES INFO] it's unfinished but gives enough of an idea for the OCT, however she's been forcibly turned into a human for Labyrinth because otherwise she'd take too long to draw, and she'd be too OP
Height/Weight: The references between her robot form and human form are accurate to each other, her human form is about average (roughly 5'3" tall and 110 lbs).
Personality:
- IMPULSIVE
- OVER-CONFIDENT
- WANTS TO SEE THE WORLD BURN
- HOT-HEADED
- HIGH-RANKING WARRIOR ON HER HOME PLANET
- SELFISH BUT NOT ENTIRELY HEARTLESS
- DRINKS ALL YOUR PEPSI AND CALLS YOU A BITCH
- NO PERSONAL SPACE
- RESPECTS THOSE WHO GIVE A GOOD FIGHT (this doesn't guarentee mercy however)
- FIGHTS FOR THE THRILL, NOT MALICE OR ANGER
- PRETTY EASY TO BEFRIEND IF SHE HASN'T ALREADY GOT HER CLAW AT YOUR THROAT
Reason for Entering:
She got into trouble with a blood starllynx , a magical creature that can manipulate living cells. It cast a spell at her as she fell into the gate to the labyrinth. The two powers combined cast her into a human body.
Her soul can't persist inside it and she'll die without finding a way out.
She also really likes the idea of being utterly unstoppable for eternity.
History:
She was born and trained on the planet Guardeon. She didn't get on well with most of her mentors but her skill and ruthlessness in combat eventually got her recognised as a Warrior Class Captain. She is currently on a mission on Earth to locate a rogue mech.
Strengths:
- can cope well under pressure
- her bracelets are sharper than they look, they're made of the same alien metal as her real body, they self-repair if broken, change shape, and can cut through soft tissue/materials like butter
- she's been trained in combat her entire 2000+ year life
- high pain tolerance
- very quick
Equipment:
Headset: Havemexe have computers inside of them that keep track of, and analyse their well-being, as well as let them communicate with each other over long distances.
Scourge's was transferred into her headset, when she transformed. Her communication to Decimal (her partner on their mission to catch a rogue on Earth) is extremely limited in the labyrinth though.
Bracelets/choker: Listed in strengths.
Weaknesses:
- she isn't used to a human body and its limitations, she'll over-estimate what she can handle. She'll forget that she is no longer made of metal, and try to tank attacks and opponents that she cannot handle in a soft, human body. For example, if she's fighting an opponent with a shell or armour, she may think she can punch through it like she could before and just end up injuring her hand.
- related to above, she doesn't take care of her new body properly, weakening her from lack of proper food and sleep
- every once in a while she'll space out due to the disconnect between her soul and body, like extreme dissociation, it only lasts a couple seconds though
- she's over-confident and often rushes in without fully assessing the risks, allowing opponents to surprise her with an unexpected counter attack
- she's extra sensitive to high or low temperatures, which'll drain her energy (havemexe don't feel temperatures the way we do)
Note: Scourge will try to kill your character if she gets in. If you specifically don't want her to succeed, please let me know! I won't put your character through anything too graphically violent or gory regardless so don't worry.
Note 2: You are free to kill her off in your entry, nothing that happens here will effect her main canon. Plus due to the magic cast on her, she'll perish off-screen if she loses anyway. Unless your character saves her in some way.
Note 3: Her eyes in her robot form are actually the red lights in her ears! All the bright red parts of her glow in the dark. She has eyes as a human but they're never visible.
Note 4: As the tournament goes on, she will become more desperate, time is running out.
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Comments: 10
“Drinks all your Pepsi and calls you a b**tch”
Ok, I hate them now. (Nah just kidding I love them)
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OMG I FORGOT I WROTE THAT
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Hi, Smudge! Scourge needs some fixes before we can accept her.
We need a weight for her as well as a height.
How sharp are her bracelets? It’s fine if they are a weapon, but that must be clearly stated. It would also be helpful to know what they were made of (metal or plastic, for example).
Being trained in combat, agility, and coordination are all separate strengths and should be listed in their own bullet points.
We need more information about the claws she can summon; what are they capable of cutting through? How long can she sustain them? They need a limitation on the latter, and a cooldown period of time between being summoned multiple times.
Right now she is unbalanced, with 8 strengths and abilities and only one valid weakness, being unaccustomed to a human body. We also need more details on that weakness; it could potentially be several weaknesses.
Is she clumsy, being used to a completely different type of form? Does she have poor stamina as a human, or flimsy joints? Those would all be valid weaknesses; check our list in Character Design if you need more ideas.
Her impulsiveness does not count unless it was upgraded for her to be so impulsive that an opponent could get a blow in because she rushed in without thinking.
Desperation is not a weakness as an opponent cannot necessarily know about it or exploit it. Glowing is also not a weakness as it does not actually weaken her, only making her more visible.
Not having abilities is not a weakness. Many competitors do not have particular special abilities and she already has 8 strengths.
Overconfidence could be an applicable weakness, but in this case it merely overlaps with impulsiveness in creating the same potential weakness if you upgraded it so I am not counting it.
Thanks!
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I've removed the claws and tried to balance her a bit more. Let me know if anything else needs to be altered!
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She's looking better! We still need a few tweaks before she's all set.
Over-estimating what she can handle is valid, but needs more specifics for clarity; does she overestimate her reach/strength and wind up making inaccurate attacks, or something like that? That would count, but we need it stated.
Her overconfidence is also valid but needs to be upgraded to say she always rushes in and barely or almost never assesses risks, allowing an opponent to get in a hit on her for it to count.
She also still needs one more weakness to be balanced, but then she'll be ready to be accepted.
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okay, how does it look now?
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Perfect! She's been accepted.
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