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ChaosKomori — Commission- Bartman part 2
Published: 2009-10-29 05:14:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 40074; Favourites: 255; Downloads: 0
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Commission for of Bartman, Lisa the Conjurer, and Mageena, a continuation of his previous commission where they were captured by evil henchmen: [link]Related content
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Well, my idea was for that security guard to actually be an undercover agent who's working to later bring down the evil organization that Bartman and Co. attempted to do. And the pages are starting from the top-down from pages 3-6. But this won't be the end of the comic, I'd like to commission more of them to create the appropriate ending...
And yeah, I wanted Bartman to lead the charge because he is the oldest of the group, and should also be the bravest and strongest of them too.
I really enjoyed the high quality and depth of this comic, and certainly hope to plan more pages to continue it. But I have some other ideas that I would like start first before that...
Cheers,
Hyper~
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Ooh, neat story! Thanks again for commissioning me on your project, it was fun to do!
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awww, he's letting them go! What a nice security guard. ^^ ....he doesn't do his job very well, does he? lol
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Ooh, maybe he's a SPY for the good guys!
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wait, its supused to be page 2 and 3 or its like 2 diferent ways of what happend ._.
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It's all one storyline. The kids just keep getting recaptured. XD
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XD Heehee, I love how Bart's the smart one here apparently
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Wow. You created the story and everything?
I think he got his money's pay. Or something of the sort.
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Nah, he came up with the storyline. :3
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XD Dude this is the biggest commission EVER! I love all the shading and everything dude. You have a wicked tangent though, mimicking a panel boarder with the last page and that prison bar. Cuz its the same width as the panel borders. But pft. W/e, right? XD Cuz it turned out awesome.
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But yes, this was a huge commish. XDDDD;;;
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another nice comic comic commission.The colors and everything else looks very good. The cover is nice, too.
I bet there will be a third part to tell the rest of the story.
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