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CHAR-C0AL — Coalpatch REF. with Bio/Story

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Description COALPATCH REF

Name : Coalpatch

Age : 18 moons (1 and a half years)

Breed : Wild cat

Gender: Female

Birthday: 6 May (like it matters >w<)

Sexuality: Straight.

Birth Clan: Duskclan

Languages spoken: Cat (English)

Parents: Goldenstar and Pantherclaw (Deceased)

Siblings: Sootpaw (Deceased)

Relationship Status: Taken by Spottedstripe.

Death: Blood loss/ Injuries (much later on)

Personality: Coalpatch is kind hearted and hard working she cat, she always tries to do her best at mostly anything, likes to make friends and would rather want peace than war. She is rather short tempered sometimes and hates to back down from an argument or challenge even if shes wrong and knows it. She is also quite well mannered and skilled at fighting thanks to her fathers (the leader at the time) "tough training" when she was an apprentice... Her soft natured she gets from her mother Pantherclaw.

Markings/looks: A small white pretty she cat with her lower half of her body a coal kind of color and coal color patches on her left eye and elbows. She has blue eyes with a yellow tint to it, as her father had yellow eyes and her mother had blue.

Likes: Coalpatch loves mice or any kind of rodent and she also likes to climb trees which helped her a lot with training, being one of the few cats that didn't mind heights. She loves the smell of the herb rooibos which is used to cure pretty much anything and loves the blue moon gatherings when they get a chance to meet starclan and talk with them.

Dislikes: Coalpatch hates Poisonclan with all the fire in her heart because they were the reason her mother, Pantherclaw and her brother, Sootpaw/patch deaths. She dislikes the taste of bird because there are too much feathers involved and the meat is too chewy.

Fears/phobias: Death of her family and friends and fire.

Short Life Bio: Well her story is that she was born in a litter of two with her brother, Sootkit. Her mom was Pantherclaw mate of the leader of Duskclan, Goldenstar. Later on her mom and brother died in a patrol under the claws of Poisonclan cats. Her medicine cat, Speckledfeather mistook her for the prophecy cat which led to unnecessary deaths and unwanted events. As she grew up she became a fine warrior. In terms of her love life, she took a fancy towards Spottedstripe. Though Spottedstripes half brother Ghostface was quite in love with Coalpatch at the time as well. Much tension was brought onto them all because of this. As for her father, he lost his last life to greencough before she was even made a warrior. The deputy Honeytail, now known as Honeystar kind of took the role of being her father. Later on she ran into a young rouge she cat named Shallow who was taken into the clan and then called Shallowgrave, they both became really good friends.
Through lots of raids she met Venomfang, her enemy from Poisonclan. The prophecy (which they thought wrong) was made clear to kill Venomfang who is a threat to all the clans.
Through all events Shallowgrave betrayed Duskclan because of the unhealthy love between her and Venomfang, in which she transferred to Poisonclan which broke Coalpatchs heart.
Venomfang then led Coalpatch into the ditches deep in Poisonclan territory where he meant to finish her off. Unfortunately and fortunately Spottedstripe followed her in which he was determined to keep Coalpatch safe (They were mates). In the whole commotion, as she was on the floor, Spottedstripe jumped out and attacked Venomfang. Which gave Coalpatch time to flee, in which she thought Spottedstripe would be following. But as he was about to leave and follow Caolpatch he was brought down by Shallowgrave who was hidden in the shadows. She killed him in which everyone never knew.
Coalpatch was heartbroken and the hatred for Venomfang grew over time, and Ghostface tried to comfort her through her pain.
Wayyyy later she was visited in her dreams by Spottedstripe for the first time. They continued to be mates through their dreams,
Coapatch became pregnant (starclan granted the dream mating >:'D oh yeah) And when the great war had come over them Honeystar forbid Coalpatch from leaving the camp, to try and keep her safe from Venomfang.
Coalpatch ignoring the warning, snuck outta the camp where she met Venomstar (He became leader of his clan by killing his brother Snakestar) When Coalpatch and Venomstar were fighting Coalpatch managed to kick Venomstar off of a cliff which was close to where they were fighting, but Venomstar managed to get hold of Coalpatch and the two of them fell over the edge. Venomstar didn't survive (starclan didn't accept him as the rightful leader of Poisonclan cause he didn't travel to Moonpool), Coalpatch did survive however. Her body was battered and bruised and she couldn't move. Her clan then found her and brought her back to camp where she then had her kits. She had two kits, one didn't survive due to the fight but the one did and Speckledfeather then discovered that Coalpatch wasn't the prophecy cat but her surviving daughter was, who was named after her mother, Coalkit. and at the moment Coalpatch then went to go hunt with starclan. THE END :'D I'M SUCH A HORRIBLE PERSON!!


It is still a work in progress xD But that is more or less the summary. C:



(If you would like to know anything else please ask me )
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Comments: 42

Mistyswirl [2015-09-05 21:51:33 +0000 UTC]

this is really good do you have Wattpad you should make this into a full story!

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Mistyswirl In reply to Mistyswirl [2015-09-05 21:53:29 +0000 UTC]

and yes, my username is based off the warrior cats

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Mistyswirl In reply to Mistyswirl [2015-09-05 21:52:21 +0000 UTC]

also, her birthday is exactly one month after mine! omg lol!!

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OBlueAuroraO [2015-06-05 04:29:11 +0000 UTC]

  <--- Me as I finish reading

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Birch52 [2015-02-08 03:42:40 +0000 UTC]

OMG Coalpatch's birthday is 1 day after mine! XD

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petal-stream [2014-07-08 00:18:14 +0000 UTC]

btw lots of people use this for rp on ig 

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tigerheartxdovewing [2014-05-15 21:14:47 +0000 UTC]

I always wanted a cat named coalpatch is that an invented warrior or do you read my mind?! lol

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WillowtheNerd [2014-02-16 01:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Her birthday is 3 days after mine

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shadowlightstorm [2014-02-11 23:57:15 +0000 UTC]

WOW OK SHE LOOKS LIKE MY FRIENDS CAT MILKSHAKE AND HER BROTHER OREO OMF BUT SRSLY THIS IS AWESOMENESS

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Dinocath [2014-01-31 01:23:35 +0000 UTC]

what was the prophecy? how did it go wrong?? i dont understand

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Senthafang [2013-12-14 02:45:03 +0000 UTC]

DuskClan is the same Clan as what I have ... X3 But luv it, awww why did she have to die (I hate it when main characters die ) Still cute

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MinerWolf9000 [2013-07-30 15:56:24 +0000 UTC]

LOVE the life bio! vewy sad... BUT AWESOME!

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to MinerWolf9000 [2013-07-30 17:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much :'D <3

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Kiji-blu [2013-05-02 00:10:20 +0000 UTC]

HOLY MOTHER OF FUDGE
coalpatch's bday
is
2
days
after
mine

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to Kiji-blu [2013-05-04 16:33:08 +0000 UTC]

That
means..
HOLY MOTHER OF FUDGE
Your bday
is
2
days
before
mine

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Kiji-blu In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 19:30:38 +0000 UTC]

my birthdays today!!! so yours is in two days!!!!!

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to Kiji-blu [2013-05-04 22:02:58 +0000 UTC]

GAHHHH ASDFGHJKL Happy birthday you amazing 'May' baby

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Kiji-blu In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-05 19:15:42 +0000 UTC]

thank youuu :'D
sorry late reply xD
happy early birthday

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AbiKittyKat [2013-05-01 15:20:27 +0000 UTC]

You are so good at writing fan fictions with your characters and most importantly, you are just too amazing at art <3

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to AbiKittyKat [2013-05-04 16:32:06 +0000 UTC]

That makes me so happy.. I am really glad that you like my art and the bio of hers

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AbiKittyKat In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 17:27:51 +0000 UTC]

c:

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xXwolves-foreverXx [2013-05-01 12:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Her bio is amazing and her design too, good job

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to xXwolves-foreverXx [2013-05-04 16:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, glad you like her..

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xXwolves-foreverXx In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 17:53:53 +0000 UTC]

how can you feel glad?i'm some kinda useless artist...

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to xXwolves-foreverXx [2013-05-04 22:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Useless? You kidding right?
Your art is beautiful! How can it be useless?

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xXwolves-foreverXx In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]

so many favs and a +watch, your crazy XD

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to xXwolves-foreverXx [2013-05-04 22:17:45 +0000 UTC]

PSHHHH I aint crazy, your art is lovely

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xXwolves-foreverXx In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 22:22:38 +0000 UTC]

thankswanna be frunds? XD

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to xXwolves-foreverXx [2013-05-04 22:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem at all
Well sure, friendship cannot be earned by asking but Im really positive if we keep talking we will become friends <3

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xXwolves-foreverXx In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 22:29:43 +0000 UTC]

well XD that realy is not a thing to ask but anyways, yu deserve a gift, and i realy love CoalPach eyes, so unique~

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to xXwolves-foreverXx [2013-05-04 22:36:32 +0000 UTC]

SHHH I DUN DESERVE NO GIFT ;w;
Haha why thank you.. <3 First someone told me that she is unique aaaa

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xXwolves-foreverXx In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 23:17:41 +0000 UTC]

she is totaly unique,but, one moar question i don't wanna ask art from you, i just wanna draw a character that you want me to, soo can we do an art trade?

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MeggisCat [2013-05-01 11:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Coalpatch is one of the most spectacular OC's ever oh and the story

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to MeggisCat [2013-05-04 16:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha thanks a ton darling
Yeah the story is a mouth full xD
*Spazzing out cause someone likes my OC's GAHHHHHH Flips table*

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MeggisCat In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-04 16:48:52 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome hun nun

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to MeggisCat [2013-05-04 22:05:45 +0000 UTC]

<3333333

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lynnstar98 [2013-05-01 10:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Very detailed story, very well done ^^

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to lynnstar98 [2013-05-01 10:34:21 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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lynnstar98 In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-01 10:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Np :3

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Cookiecat01 [2013-05-01 10:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so beautiful Coalpatch! <3

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CHAR-C0AL In reply to Cookiecat01 [2013-05-01 10:15:45 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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Cookiecat01 In reply to CHAR-C0AL [2013-05-01 11:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Np ^.^

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